Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 05:28 PM · On: The family reacts

Awww.  This is the perfect ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 05:21 PM · On: The final gift

Did they eat at all?



Author's Response:

Would you?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 05:18 PM · On: Together at last

I want to know what his special order is too.



Author's Response:

You'll see :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 05:07 PM · On: The dinner

Scrumptious meal.  I can see how Justin would be unable to resist.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure it was the meal ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 05:03 PM · On: The invitation

Tis working!!



Author's Response:

Did you ever have any doubt? :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:58 PM · On: Realization sets in

Darn, Em didn't pass the information along.  The dinner invitation sounds like a winner.



Author's Response:

I know! The one time Emmett doesn't gossip!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:53 PM · On: The outfit

Teddy!  <Claps hands>  A wonderful idea.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:51 PM · On: Two journals

It took a round about way for Justin to match up his bears name with Brian, but whatever works.  What does he get next?



Author's Response:

Yeah, no need to make it too easy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:47 PM · On: The bear

Build A Bear!  What a wonderful idea.  Thank you, Emmett.  The Irish outfit ought to clue Justin in onto who sent it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I always thought that Gus' leather bear was from there.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:43 PM · On: Justin's journal

At least Ethan knows who they are from.



Author's Response:

I know, that's the best part ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:42 PM · On: The water colors

Oops.  Taking advice from Lindsay?  I think he overdid the buying and not signing the card could go very wrong.



Author's Response:

No worries. Justin knows his man ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 04:37 PM · On: The journal

Well, he is in advertising.  If anyone can convince Justin to stay it would be him.



Author's Response:

Exactly! :)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2014 03:51 PM · On: The family reacts

This was great. Marion



Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2014 02:29 PM · On: The family reacts

LOVED IT!



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad :)

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 12:26 PM · On: The family reacts

So cute! <3



Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 08:14 PM · On: The family reacts

“I promised that I would try.”

 

awwwww... perfect last line.



Author's Response: Thank you so much :D

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2011 02:33 AM · On: The family reacts

Awwwww

Isn't this what all of us should do? Promise to try?

Excellent story!

Marla



Author's Response:

Reviewer: perle84 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:21 PM · On: The family reacts

That was realy cute. I like Brian's acting. *smile*
It was so great. *hug you*



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much. Hugs you back :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 04:00 AM · On: The family reacts

Michael is so clueless! Everyone's reactions were right on though. And Em is right, Brian and Justin are too cute, they can't help themselves.

Great story, really enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me.

No, they really can't help themselves.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:53 AM · On: The final gift

OMG! I LOVE THE RING!!! Glad my idea helped and soooo glad to see Brian and Justin working things out and back where they belong!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the idea. I saw a ring with something that looked like little metal pearls in the grooves and I just imagined it with suns and shells instead. I'm glad you liked it, I was a little nervous.

Reviewer: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:32 PM · On: The family reacts

I enjoyed this very much. I hope you will update 'Justin comes home' next :)

Author's Response:

I'm in the middle of the next chapter of 'Justin comes home'. I'm not sure I'm all that happy with it at the moment, though. We'll see what happens.

I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 07:57 AM · On: The family reacts

I just want to say besides enjoying your stories I think it is great that you finish them and don't take forever to do it. Thanks for that.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy my stories. Unfortunately I have a few stories that has been dormant for a lot longer than I would have liked. I do try to finish them as fast as possible.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 04:59 AM · On: The family reacts

wonderful wonderful wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 07:59 PM · On: The family reacts

Another great, beautiful story of Brian and Justin!!!! Thanks and more stories to come.

Author's Response: Thank you. I have some I the works.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 05:03 PM · On: The family reacts

'michael looked like I just burnt down his store' lol!  great chapter



Author's Response: Thank you so  much.

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2008 01:12 AM · On: The final gift

can't wait for the conclusion!

Author's Response: It's with my beta as we speak.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 12:59 PM · On: The final gift

Thanks for the update.

Brian won his campaigned to be with his Sunshine... Love it 



Author's Response: Of course he did. They belong together. I'm glad you loved it.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 12:55 PM · On: The final gift

that ring was perfect and it sounded so nice

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 12:53 PM · On: The final gift

i can't wait to see everyone's reaction. if their friends are really friends then they'll just let it slip by as them being together is natural. no need to question it. no need for comments except congrats.

loved this chapter. brian gave justin everything he always wanted.



Author's Response: Thank you so  much. I hardly doubt that with their group of friends they will let it slide.

Reviewer: camjakefan (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2008 02:26 AM · On: The dinner

I can't wait to see what the special order is.

Author's Response: That seems to be the general consensus. Thank you.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:10 AM · On: The dinner

ooh i can't wait for him to give justin his special order gift. soon i hope.

Author's Response: Two more chapters. I think.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 10:23 PM · On: The dinner

Yea!! Loved it, so good to see them together. I hope Justin says that he will move back intot he loft!

Author's Response: They belong together.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 10:13 PM · On: The invitation

*claps* Go to your man Justin!

Author's Response: Thank you. Justin will always go to Brian, if Brian calls.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 05:24 PM · On: The dinner

the dinner sounded so romantic, cant wait to see what the special order is, update soon

Author's Response: I will. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 01:12 PM · On: Realization sets in

thanks for the update. interesting!!!! no doubt brian can win back his sunshine!!

Author's Response: You're welcome. Was there ever any doubt?

Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Realization sets in

bri could give or send jus chocolate roses or chocolate flowers or candy in the shape of hearts

Author's Response:

Thank you fo the suggestion.

I might use that.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Realization sets in

this just keeps getting better, update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like it.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:28 AM · On: Realization sets in

I bet Brian was smiling like a damn fool!

YEA! Justin left Ethan and it won't take too long for Brian to find out at all. 

Brian is going all out, a dinner reservation? A first date? Impressive and a great thing to do to prove he wants Justin back. 



Author's Response:

Yep, when Brian does something he goes all out.

He has made a dessision and come hell or high water, he is going through with it.

Reviewer: violette7 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:25 AM · On: Realization sets in

I'm still loving this story! It's making me all giggly. I can't wait to see how Brian reacts when he learns that Justin left Ian :)

Author's Response:

I can live with giggly :-)

Brian is going to have a hard time conceling his big ass smile.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:22 AM · On: The outfit

I can totally picture Justin in those leather pants and orange shirt. Brian is so detail oriented when it comes to Justin. He knows him to the teeniest, tiniest little detail...that man is sooo in love with Justin. Love it!

Author's Response: Brian is anal retentive about most things in his life. It would stand to reason that the man he loves is no different.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:20 AM · On: Two journals

I knew Justin would love the bear and how CUTE of Brian to reference Queen! I love that!!!

The fiddler looked somewhat constipated 

Didn't he always? LOL!

Wow, Brian's scared Justin will turn him down. Nah...he still has Sunshine wrapped around his finger! =)



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are wrapped tightly around each others fingers.

I did quite a bit of reserch on the name Brian before I found the Queen thing. I'm glad you liked it. 

Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:19 AM · On: Realization sets in

three wonderful chapters. i'm a happy camper. so no one told brian that justin had moved back to debbie's. what are they waiting for? the next family dinner when justin's there alone?

a real date? out to dinner? when is brian getting his award?



Author's Response:

I know, the invitation for the dyke of the year award is in the mail :-D

Nobody has had a chance to tell him yet, don't worry, he'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 08:44 PM · On: The bear

i'm sure justin will know exactly who the bear is from. maybe he'll begin to see a different brian, the one he always knew was there.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 08:43 PM · On: The bear

i'm sure justin will know exactly who the bear is from. maybe he'll begin to see a different brian, the one he always knew was there.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 08:41 PM · On: The bear

i'm sure justin will know exactly who the bear is from. maybe he'll begin to see a different brian, the one he always knew was there.

Author's Response:

Wow, that was a lot of comments. I appriciate every single one of them. It looks so nice ;-)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 08:37 PM · On: Justin's journal

even if the fiddler had all the money in the world he would never think to do something like that for justin. buyy himself more fiddles, yeah. paintsand supplies for justin, no way.

Author's Response: Exactly, Brian may be vain and buy a lot of things for himself, but he always think about his frinds and what they need.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2008 01:43 PM · On: The bear

Yay he sent the bear :) and Yay for 2 new chapters. The bear sounded perfect, love build a bear, and Ethan is going to be so pissed when the bear arrives lol

Author's Response: It was such a good idea I just had to use it. Ethan is not a happy camper right now. He knows deep down that he got Justin for all the wrong reasons.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 01:21 PM · On: The bear

Brian in a Build-A-Bear! LOLOLOLOL! Oh that is priceless. My goodness this man wants Justin back BADLY!

Author's Response: I knoe. I just couldn't resist that visual. That was way to priceless.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 01:18 PM · On: Justin's journal

Oh Justin, you're so close to the truth and you don't even know it. But won't he be surprised to know that again, he is the exception to Brian's "don't go after anyone" rule.

HA! I knew Ethan would be pissed, but good for Justin sticking to his guns and keeping his gift. 



Author's Response:

Justin already knows that he is the exception to all of Brian's rules, he is just so hurt right now that he has to convince himself otherwise.

It is understandable that Ethan is pissed. His brand new boyfriend has a secret admirer.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2008 01:16 PM · On: Justin's journal

thanks for the update and more please.

Author's Response:

You're welcome. I'll update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 12:51 PM · On: The water colors

Eventually Brian can maybe send Justin a replica of the cowry bracelet or send his. This can be down the line once we know that Justin is becoming putty in Brian's hands and close to coming back. =)

Author's Response: I love that idea. It could be like a commitment thing. Oh, the possibilities.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 12:47 PM · On: The water colors

I was hoping you would do something where Brian would secretly send him a gift! The roses made of paper on the paint brushes is so romantic, loved it!

I hope Justin doesn't get upset that Brian did this for him and just says thank you (well after his mini queen out...cuz its Justin afterall! lol). I'd love to see him totally flabbergasted about it though. Being kinda confused b/c its so not Brian to do this. Ethan I can see having a major issue with this and saying that Brian is only doing it to get Justin back. Which will be true.  



Author's Response:

I think Justin will only queen out because of the cost of oll of these things. I did try and find the most expencive items I could (Brian would do that, if he was adviced that they were the best).

Ethan is going to freak, and rightfully so. I think he knows that Brian can win Justin back if he puts a little efford into it.

Reviewer: Jules (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2008 12:15 PM · On: The water colors

tickets to vermont, so they can finally go on holiday together

Author's Response: Wow, that would be great. Thank you.

Reviewer: Maria (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2008 10:58 AM · On: The water colors

Bri could send Jus some icecream (so Jus remebers when they ate icecream on the chaise) and some sort of jewellery (to show up the crap the fiddler gave Jus) so maybe a pendant or something with a charm of a sun, some sort of art thing like a palette or brushes etc or a heart with it engraved 'you are my heart' or 'you will always have my heart' or something like that, I am eager to read more

Author's Response: All, wery good ideas. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2008 10:38 AM · On: The water colors

Ok, how about, since Brian is in advertising, he sends his gifts to Justin, but anonymously.  Well – not quite, since I assume in advertising first you want your target to be a little curious to gain a lot of their attention.  So maybe

the card to start off with something like:  “For my Picasso”.  Justin would know,but can be really really really sure? 

             or

maybe you or other readers can come up with a better line.  I think Justin  should know, but not be sure.  Also Justin could hope it is Brian and maybe find some way of replying without being too specific. 

 Also, how about Brian sending Justin a few gifts every day with some a card enclosed with somesort of hint who they are from. 

OK?

 DavidR

Author's Response:

I like the idea that Justin can't be sure but suspect who they are from. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 10:29 AM · On: The water colors

how romantic is he. he's adorable like this.

Author's Response: I know. Brian in 'Ridiculous Romantic mode' is to die for, not that he isn't always ;-)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2008 07:51 AM · On: The water colors

omg that was so perfect, turning the brushes into roses was so great, I cant wait to read more, what about brian sending justin a toy sun and sending a note like 'please bring sunshine home' or something like that, update soon

Author's Response: That's a great idea. Thank you for that.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2008 05:56 AM · On: The journal

thanks for the update and more please. another interesting story to look forward to....

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:26 AM · On: The journal

This story has serious potintial. I'd love to see what you do with it.

Author's Response:

Me too, I can't wait to see what people come up with.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:18 AM · On: The journal

I like how this is starting off. If I come up with anything as the story progresses, I'll let you know!

Author's Response: Thank you, for both of those things.

Reviewer: violette7 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 07:32 PM · On: The journal

I adore the premise of this story! (and I'm loving the journal format) I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2008 04:48 PM · On: The journal

Im loving this, heres my ideas, I think Brian telling Justin he wants him and then showing him by sending him stuff like flowers, chocolates, art supplies a teddy bear etc oh and sending him a photo of them together and then asking him out on dates and showing him he can do romance way better than the fiddler lol update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment. I have allready sent the next chapter off to my beta. There is a little of what you mention here, but the rest is going in my suggestion box for later chapters.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 01:12 PM · On: The journal

show justin the journal. as the saying goes, honesty is the best policy. if there was anything that justin wanted most from brian besides his love was him being honest about how he felt about them.

Author's Response: That's a good idea, but I think that might be the last, or next to last chapter. I'll keep it in mind, and thank you so much for playing along with this crazy idea. :-)

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