Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Collar Bound
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2023 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

This was a great sequel!!   I was so glad to see Melanie drop the case and end up giving Brian joint custody.    That was definitely the right move to make.   

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2019 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

they should taking Gus and trown those 2 dykes to the wolfes

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 11:37 AM · On: Protecting Brian

good for you Justin, hope he reams Mel a new one too

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 11:30 AM · On: Another Obstacle

Never liked Lindsey, nasty cunt

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

perfect ending 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

OMG I am laughing so fucking much right now.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

Fucking right they do, they're just as bad as the homophobes out there.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Surprise Continues

I may never look at these two boys the same again - I LOVE IT.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Surprise

Justin is so kinky, I effinng love it.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 01:29 AM · On: Everyone Has Secrets

I have always hated Linz, but omg, this is making me so ragey. And when Brian walked out of the diner after seeing and hearing Gus call his name? omg :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 01:20 AM · On: Reconnecting

THAT WAS SO HOT *hoses this chapter down* protective Justin is just too much for me <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 12:49 AM · On: How We Met

Fucking Mikey, pos :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 12:32 AM · On: Legalities

LMAO they both fucked the lawyer, I knew he and Jake would end up having more in common than Justin lolz

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 12:26 AM · On: Top or Bottom, Who Cares?

That was hot, but not as hot as toppy dom Justin haha. But I love how he is taking care of his boy aw!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 12:19 AM · On: Protecting Brian

Dom Justin is so fucking hot, I cannot even. The way he's taking care of his boy.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 12:06 AM · On: Another Obstacle

OMGOM THAT BITCH

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2016 08:40 PM · On: The Demo

Oh, HAI, I found a sequel to this and I am so happy :D That was HOT!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Wonderful end to the story! If the muse were to strike you, it would be great to have a third story in this verse.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

So sad to see the end of this series. I loved the newly introduced characters and how Emmett and Ted once again had Brian's back.  Really hope a sequel follows so we can learn more about all their relationships, including Todd's,and maybe finally Ben could have some action too- preferably without self-righteous Mikey. So much more we could enjoy with Brian and Justin too:-)

Reviewer: sharon buckney (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2015 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

I loved both leather bond and collar bound..... really loved the new characters u had created...... would love to have more stories wiv them....

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2014 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

lol I'm so late I can't believe what Ive been missing cause I only started reading fanfics I love both stories it was awesome to read 

Reviewer: Solstice1394 (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2014 03:05 AM · On: Protecting Brian

That made me really sad and a little agry for Brian. 

Solce

Reviewer: Solstice1394 (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2014 01:21 AM · On: Another Obstacle

It started with such easy to fall in love with bater and cute fluffly scene of Justin and Brian. I knew the shit was going to hit the fan. I saw that picture and thought of how it looked like a court battle between Gus. I don't think Brian could ever choose between those two boys.

-Solce

PS I really love the caporera and the breakfast in bed scene that coffee remarks was too cute and fluffy.

Reviewer: Solstice1394 (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2014 01:08 AM · On: The Demo

I read about demonstrations this was interesting to see it presented here. I knew eventually you were going to have Brian do it but the first chapter WOOW! I still love how Brian is taken care of by Justin the Dom.

-Solce

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2013 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Still not a fan of BSDM. I like how you had the friends all come together to fight for Brian. I am glad that things worked out for Gus.

Reviewer: KinnetiKart23 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

I absolutely loved this story as well as its prequel. It's always refreshing to read a story that opens your eyes to something new and different. I hope that you're considering continuing with another addition. :)

-Louchelle



Author's Response:

Hey Louchelle, thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Hugs!

Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

I have to say I enjoyed your stories. Extremely AU and OOC but good. different. And I would certainly welcome sequel with Brian as Dom. It was bound to happen :)



Author's Response:

Hey Lipps,  I'm glad you enjoyed the stories because I loved writing them. *grins* Hugs!

Reviewer: P.R.N.A (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Hi there again. i just wanted to ask about the background of the characters. Since Brian and justin didn't meet until what seems like after the 5th season, did all the story lines in the orginal qaf show happen? You mentioned the bashing, Mikey marrying Ben, Ted and Blake, Emmet and Drew bur what about Brian's storylines? And why was Gus born into the story so late? I'm sorry if i asked yo too much it's just that i really wanted to understand the story better.

It would be good also to get some background on the other characters like Jake and Miguel etc etc.

I know you finished the story it's just that i can't seem to get enough of it, i itching for another sequel



Author's Response:

Hey again.  *grins*  I wanted to write Leather Bound but I never believed Brian was emotionally stable enough to be a Dom and while Justin had the emotional stability, he didn't have the experience.  That's why I push the timeline a few years, to give Justin time to have that experience.  I didn't change any of the other characters with the exception of Gus being born later because I wanted Justin to be there, so I had to push that timeline forward.  What more do you want to know about the original characters?  I hope I've answered at least a couple of your questions.

Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: P.R.N.A (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Hi, i just finished reading 'leather bound' and then moved on to 'collar bound' and i loved LOVED the story line. I've noticed it's been close to 2 years since you've finished and was wondering if you were going to make a sequel to 'collar bound?' You can't leave me hanging like that.... Lol. All the best in the future



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.  I really don't know if I'm going to write a sequel or not so it depends. *grins*  I wish you the best as well.

Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2011 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

No!!!!! I want an epilogue or something showing Brian as a Dom for Justin! I know u finished this story so long ago though so I guess i can keep dreaming lol

Author's Response:

Hi Shauna!  Originally, I intended to write another story featuring Brian as the Dom and I still might. *grins*  I hope you've enjoyed it anyway.

Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Um, is almost two years long enough of a break from this universe??? ;-)

I just found LB & CB and fell in love with them! Plus there's still so much to explore - Brian and Mikey's reconcilliation (or lack of, depending), Justin & Brian spending more and more time with Gus (& JR), Brian learning to Dom...

I think you've done an incredible job of indroducing your readers to various aspects of the D/s world while at the same time weaving an intriguing and extremely enjoyable story :)



Author's Response:

I know it's been a long time since I finished this story, but I just don't have the time to devote to writing the last part at the moment.  I do have one planned and I hope to get to it soon, but I make no promises.  I really appreciate the compliment because that means I achieved what I started out to do.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the story, and thank you for commenting. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

I just read these two stories and I absolutely love them. I have been a little "afraid" of them for a long time, thinking that there was more of them with other people, one of the things I don't read.

I would love a sequel with Brian in Dom training and what their relationship would be like then, that would be so great.

I'm a big fan of your writing in general, just thought I'd mention that ;)



Author's Response:

Hey Edom,  I'm glad you enjoyed these stories as they mean a lot to me personally.  I put a little of myself in all of my stories, but this series says more than most. *grins* I have a third part planned, but I'm not sure when I'll get to work on it.  Thanks for the wonderful comment. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: leah (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

just read them both again love leather and collar bound.....would love another sequel



Author's Response:

I have a third part planned, so hopefully I can work on it soon.  Glad you enjoyed these stories and thanks for commenting.  Hugs!

Reviewer: carolruga (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Hi again!

Yes, I read both fics and yes, liked the second as much as the first. You develope an intense story and the end is like suspense movie, you don't know how it will end and then it ends and feeling is awsome!

 

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad that people enjoy what I write. Thanks again for taking the time to comment.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2008 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Oh my !!! Is your next story going to be about Brian being in control and Justin obeying ???

I love both of your story a lot ! It was hot, emotionally challenging and well written ! But I must admit I prefer to see Justin being taking care of by Brian than the other way around !

In fact, I have to say I would not have read this story at all if it had been from another author than you! (well except from FFolked)

See you around with your next story! Jersey :))

  



Author's Response: Hey Jersey!  I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond, but I wasn't notified that you commented.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story and yes the final part will be with Brian in charge.  I'm very touched by your wonderful comment.  Thank you so much.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2008 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

too sad this story is finished. but the waiting for the last chapter (to read it all at once) was worth it.... I love your stories... great job:-)) rose

Author's Response: Hey Rose, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.  I'm glad you like my stories and I don't blame you for waiting till the last chapter...I do that myself.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sakuya Kira (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2008 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

I CANT BELEAVE ITS OVER!!! *crys*

Thank you very much for the story! don't stop writeing.



Author's Response: Hey Sakuya, I'm really glad you enjoyed this story.  I don't plan on stopping any time soon.  Thank you for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2008 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Hey Rena. I love this universe- I was hooked from the first time I read 'Leather Bound'. I hope maybe you'll come back to it one day. My ultimate dream would be to read a story based on Jake and Miguel- these are such intriuging characters! Anyway, I'll look forward to whatever you will share with us next ;) Thanks!

Author's Response: Hey Sapphire,  I'm glad you enjoyed my Bound series...well so far. *grins*  I have been thinking of writing a story based on the original characters.  I will definitely get around to doing that one day.  Thanks for all your support.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

"We’ve come a long way in the last couple of years. I think we can survive anything…even you being in control.”

Master...Cookie??? I love it!!!!

Great finale!!!

xmao



Author's Response: LOL...glad you liked that kika.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2008 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

That was a great ending. I love how everyone (or almost everyone) came together in the end. Justin was right with Brian wanting to be a Dom, luckly they love each other enough to work it out. Fantastic job and thank you so much for sharing it. I can't wait to see what you come up with after your break.

Author's Response:

Thanks Jackie,  I appreciate all your support.  I certainly hope you like the next story I have planned.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2008 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Can't remember if I reviews on BJ or not so if I am repeating myself, sorry! Just wanted to thankyou for a wonderful fic! I have loved it. Hope you have a great break. I would love to know how Brian goes being a dom and hope that you may just be persuaded to do yet another sequel. Luv ya! :)

Author's Response: hey dphysh!  I will probably write more in this universe, but after two years I definitely need to take a break.  I don't want to write just to write, so I need some new inspiration.  *grins*  Thanks for all your support and I hope you find another story of mine you like to tide you over.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2008 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Rest up, but come back soon!  I've read and reread this story, and Leather bound several times!  *sigh*

Thank you so much for hours of wonderful entertainment!



Author's Response:

Hey Gina,

Thank you for all your support through this whole process.  I'm glad you enjoyed the stories, and I hope to hear more from you in the future.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Soka (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

Hey,

I say there should be at least one more chapter to make an even 20! :P

Anyways thanks for the great story, it kept me amused for the last 2 years! :D Take care!



Author's Response:

There is one more chapter...LOL.  I hope you get this.   Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Cass (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2008 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

I hope you will continue this once you have a break, the characters and this story are amazing. I hope before the end of this story we will get to see Brian and Justin exchange 'I love Yous' I dont think they have said it to each other have they? and I think it would be nice, some sweetness between them after all the stress they have had

Author's Response: Hey Cass, No they haven't said it, but they've shown it.  I hope you like what I did with the ending.  *grins*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 08:47 AM · On: The Demo

i  just want to say that  i love all your fics  and i realy hope you will continue whit this fic when the break is over i just love both leather bound and collar bound very much.

 

Many hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response: Hey Buffytess!  Thank you for commenting and I'm honored that you enjoy my writing.  I'm sure I'll visit this universe again...it happens to be a favorite of mine.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2008 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

Hah! that ending was funny!...great story all round...you are a great writer...i do hope you carry on after your break. thanx

Author's Response: Thank you carbon69.    I'm always writing something, so I'm sure I'll get back to this story eventually.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

This chapter really showed the change that Brian has gone through. It's great that Mel and Brian were able to work everything out. Then end was great.The image of Brian washing a car...mm. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hey Jackie.  I'm glad you liked the way I dealt with Brian and Mel.  I hope you like the ending.  *keeps fingers crossed*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2008 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

You really make the difference in Brian obvious here! He didn't rub Mel's nose in his victory, just seemed to take it in his stride. We all know he will neer forgive Mel and Linds but he is now mature enough and secure enough notto let it interfere with his chance of being a great dad to Gus! YAY!!! Also thanks so much for the image of Brian washing a car! Hmmmmm! (Can I purloin it and substitute my own car!!?? Huh!!?? Pretty please!!) :)

Author's Response: LOL dphysh!  I had images of Brian washing this long line of cars...you know like for a charity event or something...hehehe.  So, yeah.  He can wash your car too.  I'm glad you liked the way I handled the stuff with Mel.  I hope you like the way I end this one.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

LOL  I sooo loved this chapter! It was perfect, from begining to end! I will be so sorry when this story ends, but I will look forward to your new stories.

 



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I know what you mean.  I always feel a little down each time I end a story, but who knows...I may do another one.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

well, that is a funny ending. I love this story so much. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Glad to hear it, rose.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2008 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

I just hope they all have showers after that cos if I was them in the presence of Linds and manipulating Mel I would feel really dirty! I think they were magnificent in their string free benevolence and I still want Mikey to take a long walk off a very short pier! So happy to catch up with one of my fav fics! Still loving it!! :)

Author's Response: LOL dphysh!  I'm glad you're still reading.  I hope you like how I handle things.  *winks*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2008 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

Hmmm was that good or bad? Brian's going to be tick though. Maybe not at Justin, but Chris and Jake that's different. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Hey Jackie!

Brian has come a long way during this story.  As I explained in my comment to Gina...the old Brian...yes he'd have been beyond pissed, but now.  Brian has come to accept that there are people in his life who really care for him.  He knows that the guys wouldn't do anything to hurt him and he also knows that they don't see him as some weak or helpless person needing to be saved.  He will see the gesture for what it was...family taking care of family.  Let me know how you feel about the next couple of chapters.  Hugs, Rena 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2008 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

I concur w/ Gina Marie.

I think the 3 perhaps went too far approaching and offering what they did.

On the other hand it will be intersting to see what Mel the lawyer/ mom/ uber woman does with said proposals.... will they accept but continue w/ the court date, or drop and get to know our lovely group of men?

I see Lins dropping the court battle for the money and in her WASPy way being nicey to our guys.

Love LB & CB! Always love seeing a new chapter.....



Author's Response:

Hey Anonymous,

I explained my reasons in Gina's comment.  As for Mel, well I think Justin made his point with Melanie when he compared her to the homophobes.  Mel wouldn't like that at all and I think that would make her look twice at what she was doing.  Melanie would hate taking money from anyone...she's fiercely independent, but she is also a realist.  She wouldn't deny things to her children just to prove a point.  If the guys had made it a choice like...take the money and drop the case or keep going with the case and get no money...then Mel would have told them to go fuck themselves, but the way it was handled...I think she'd step back and see the advantages to her kids.  

I'm glad you like the stories...I do too...LOL.  Let me know what you think of the next couple.  Hugs, Rena 

Reviewer: justcreek (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2008 11:13 PM · On: The Demo

first i love your story.

 

but i'm a little disapointed. I wanted to see the guys quick the girls AND mickey ass!!  in this story lindsay is such a bitch! and i find it too easy that the guys pay for eveything!!I hoped to see the girls scared a little bit, feared to loose

Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2008 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

Oh.. that went well.. hope Mel and Linds finally make up there mind... great chapter.. oh.. as I haven't commented for a long, long time.. just wanted to let you know.. I love CB just as much as LB! Great work!

Author's Response: Hey Sigi!  I'm glad you're still reading.  Thanks!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2008 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

I think Justin, Chris and Jake should haven't offered so much.  It's not their place, it's Brian's. (at least as far as Gus is concerned ) Brian and Justin's.  I wonder how Brian will feel about Justin, Chris and Jake taking over the finacial responsibility for his son's schooling? and home? 

This chapter was a little uncomfortable for me.  I was not comfortable with the boys stepping in like they did.

Having said that, you know how addicted I am to your stories!  I do love how Justin is trying to help Brian and the way he continues to care for him.

Looking forward to an update.



Author's Response:

Hey Gina!

I didn't want to write another court battle fic.  So, I sat down and thought about what was going on in the story, and how Justin handled Kip Thomas in the show...after thinking about it for awhile, I decided that Justin would do whatever he could to "fix" things for Brian.  As far as the other characters, well they all love Justin and Brian and they have money to burn so to speak...so I can see them doing this to help out Brian and Gus.

How does Brian feel about them doing it?  Well, Brian has come a long way from the man he was when he met Justin.  He no longer feels threatened about asking for help, so he will see this as his friends helping him...nothing more.  I can understand how some people would see this as the guys sticking their noses into something that was none of their business, but this is Jake we're talking about here...LOL.  They look at it as taking care of their family.  How many times did Brian do just that for his friends...remember he even offered to pay for Deb's house.  So, I know it wasn't a perfect solution to the problem, but I do think it works for the story and the characters.

 I'm glad you still like the story.  Keep me informed about what you think of the next couple of chapters.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2008 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 17: Enough is Enough

Haha the family fortune thing was the best. Brian is a lucky man to have such friends. If only his other 'friends' would care as much. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: LOL Jackie!  I'm glad you liked that...hehehe.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: vanilla18@hotmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2008 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Enough is Enough

Another amazing chapter This chapther is slaming how ever enough is Enough and the girls need to stop there shit The boys need to teach them a lesson they will never forget

Author's Response: Hey vanilla!!!  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter...it was fun to write.  I certainly hope you like the way I handle this.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2008 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: Enough is Enough

Love Alex and Miguel!  Hate mikey!  Great chapter, but I'm a little confused. Was Justin Jakes sub at one point? I though Chris trained Justin. 

I'm always so excited to see an update from you, and never disappointed!



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  Justin was Jake's sub.  He was never officially trained by Chris, but I'm sure he picked up quite a few pointers from him.  I'm glad you enjoy the story. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2008 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 17: Enough is Enough

Mikie just doesn't get it.... Love Brian trying to explain to him though. Hmmm family fortunes.... and what are those Masters planning.....

Love the story



Author's Response: Hey alys!  No, Mikey doesn't get it, but I'll hold on to hope.  *grins*  Those Masters are devious...hehehe.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: Enough is Enough

I love alex and miguel saying about their fortunes and argueing with mikey lol, mikey is so rude calling them freaks and hes got a nerve insulting brian and justins relationship, justin would do anything for brian hed probably even die for him and I bet mikey or nobody else in their gang could honestly say that, oh and jake rounding up all the deviants to form a plan lol fabulous

Author's Response: Hey Sara!  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  It was so much fun to write.  I love Jake...well I love all my characters, but Jake is a handful...LOL.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 16: Alex's Agony

Hot B/J sex followed by Chris being so understanding and sweet and totally taken by Alex.  A great chapter all round.

Author's Response: Thanks Big J!  I loved writing B/J and the new characters just give me more toys to play with.  *winks* Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2008 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 16: Alex's Agony

What great couples. Love the interactions and how they communicate.

Author's Response: Thanks alys! I appreciate it.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2008 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: Alex's Agony

It must have been hard for Chris not to just take Alex in his arms and tell him everything would be OK. Good thing he understands Alex so well. I have to admit that I missed the significance of the whip- did Alex want it used on him to help him forget? Is that what he meant when it said ‘make it stop’? Sorry- I guess I missed the boat on that one ;) Anyway, great chapter!



Author's Response: Hey Sapphire!  No you didn't miss the boat at all...that's exactly what Alex meant and what he wanted.  Yes, Chris does understand Alex and he acted the only way that Alex would accept...at that moment in time.  Thanks for commenting!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2008 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 16: Alex's Agony

I felt so bad for Alex when he thought Chris would hate him, its not his fault what happened to him and I thought Chris handled the situation perfectly and Brian and Justin were hot as usual, nothing is hotter than the way they both submit to each other so freely

Author's Response: Hey Sara!  I'm glad you like the playful Brian and Justin...I love to write them.  Thanks so much for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2008 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 16: Alex's Agony

Can I just say I loved this chapter? *blissful sigh*

Author's Response:

Hey Gina!  I'm glad you liked it.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2008 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

It's great to see big bad Jake show how much he loves Miguel. They are a great match. And of course Brian and Justin are just perfect. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hey Jackie!  Yeah, I love Jake and Miguel together.  Brian and Justin are just a given.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2008 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

Thanks J That chapter did a lot for entertaining my ridiculous Miguel fetish (I think it might be the fact that he has curly blonde hair…) How could Jake ever doubt his 'little mouse'? I hope we’ll be hearing more about these two…(please?) Great chapter!



Author's Response: Hey Sapphire!  You have a Miguel fetish?  You too, huh? *grins* I'm sure you'll hear more from them.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2008 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

Opsssss...The Anonymous - Date: Aprile 18, 2008 9,30 am it's me!

*grrrr* ;-)



Author's Response: LOL kika!  Thanks, Rena

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2008 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

This fics becomes more and more interesting! *grin*Some descriptions can become useful...who know! I love the story that describe the absurd jealousy of * Linds *, * Mel * and * Michael * (above all). Especially theirs sly way in order to make feel in guilt someone...aka Brian.

I'm sucks for the long comment in english! Sorry :-|



Author's Response: I think you did a great job with this comment, and thank you for taking the time to leave one.  I know what you mean about Mikey, Lindz, and Mel.  I hope you continue to enjoy this story.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2008 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

Could I love Jake and Miguel any more???

Great chapter! thanks.



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I know what you mean.  Jake has always had a very special place in my heart.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2008 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

I loved this chapter, the way Jake was so supportive of Miguel even when he thought he was going to leave him, they really are perfect for each other. and I think Brian and Justin both win because they have each other, cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Hey Sara!  You're right on both counts.  Jake and Miguel are perfect for one another and Brian and Justin are both winners.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2008 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

Great chapter, love how Jake knew but waited for Miguel to tell. B&J.... always love them.

Waiting impatiently already for you next chapters..... ths for the great story.



Author's Response: Hey alys!  I'm so glad you liked this chapter and thank you so much for commenting!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Trenice (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

Jake and the other  what's their dom names?

Author's Response:

Hey Trenice!  If you want to find out a bit about all the characters, including their scene names, check out my website.  http://www.elyxer.co.uk/elyxerfanfic/CoL/CollarBoundCastofCharacters.HTML

Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2008 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Surprise Continues

WOW! I'm not sure if I want to visit this place or not but the way you portray it is truly intriguing and obviously just what Brian needed for a distraction from his present worries! Still adoring this fic! My laptop has decided to be difficult so I only have limited access at the moment! Bt I can't wait for next week's ep! :)

Author's Response: Hey dphysh!  I'm really glad that you're still reading and enjoying the story.  I look forward to your comments.  Thanks for all your support.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2008 08:50 AM · On: The Demo

Just when I thought this couldn't get any hotter it did.  Fanning myself and running for a cold shower.  Unbelievable.  How could anyone think of food at time like that?  Love how Justin is so casual about the whole thing.  The tour should be something else.

Author's Response: Hey Big J!  I'm glad you liked this chapter...it was fun to write.  *grins*  Who cares about the food????  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Belle (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2008 01:59 AM · On: The Demo

Oh waiter, I would like a bucket of ice and a fan please, I'm a tad bit over-heated! lol. So hot and so stoked that there is more to the place. God this just keeps getting better and better. Now, if only i could find a place like this one for me........ Well Done!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, Belle.  I hope you enjoy what I've done with the next chapter.  *grins*  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2008 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Surprise Continues

Goodness Gracious. Now that's a dinner. It's great seeing how much they care for each other, espcially seeing Justin slowly bring out Brian. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks Jackie!  I enjoy writing this story, so I love it when readers see what I'm trying to show.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2008 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Surprise Continues

Hot, hot chapter!  But there must be something wrong with me, lol  I kept thinking, "damn!" how can he really enjoy such a great meal with all that sexual pleasure! lol  I must be in a slump, I kept thinking about how sweet that pheasant meat must  be..... lol  Serioulsy, great chapter!



Author's Response: LOL Gina!  I thought the exact same thing when I was writing it, but then I thought, well if Brian had a choice between hot sex and food, what would he pick?  Thanks for commenting!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Tess (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2008 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Surprise Continues

very hot, I really like the way brian and justin are so into each other its like they dont even notice other people or their surroundings they are just so in love and so hot for each other nothing else compares or matters

Author's Response: Hey Tess,  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  Well, when Brian and Justin are together, things get rather intense.  *winks*  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2008 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Surprise

Just what the doctor (and us!) ordered I am sure!! Perfect as usual! :)

Author's Response: Thanks dphysh! I can't wait to hear what you think of the next chapter.  *grins*  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Surprise

Well that is going to be an interesting dinner. Great chapter.

Author's Response: LOL Jackie!  I certainly plan on it being a very memorable dinner.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: vanilla18@hotmail.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2008 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Surprise

It is going to be a long nite for bri I like it i like it

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure he'll like it too, Vanilla.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2008 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

Wonderful, wondeful, wonderful!!! another fantastic ep! I do like hearing about the other characters as it si like they are now Brian's family and so of course we want to know! However Alextires to exorcise hie demons will be what works for him but if he is feeling like that he really does need to find a positive way to do it for both himself and the court case as when he is needled by the opposing attorney he is likely to explode and then they cna exploit that as being an example of the kind of people Gus will be expose to! (EEEK now I have more pacing to do till the next ep!)  Fantastic but worrying! :)

Author's Response: Hey dphysh!  I love getting reviews from you because you always have the greatest ideas!  Don't worry about Alex and the lawyer...all will be well.  I'm glad that you can relate to the new characters.  I was afraid that people wouldn't enjoy reading about anyone other than Brian and Justin, so it's nice to know I was wrong.  *grins*  Thanks for commenting!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

Another great chapter. Learning more about the other characters is great and seeing them act together as well, it adds more to the story I think. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hey Jackie!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter and that you like the original characters.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

This chapter so touched my heart!  It was poignant, emotional and very revealing. I love reading about the lives of all the boys in this story.  I cannot tell you how much I love your writing, and these wonderful characters you've created. Great update.

Author's Response: Aww Gina!  I love your comments.  Thank you so much.  I'm so glad that you like my original characters, because I love them.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2008 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

They are SO sweet together! I love how much they care for each other.  I still have to say the Miguel is my favorate, so I'm so glad he has Alex's shoulder to cry on. And Jake's. Please take care of him :) I adore this story ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sapphire!  I don't know if I can pick a favorite character, but I do adore Miguel.  I promise that Jake, Justin, Chris, Brian, and Alex will all take care of Miguel and each other.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Leah (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2008 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

i love this series......one of my faves ever.....and ive read sooooo many......cant wait for more imhooked



Author's Response: Considering all the great writers in this fandom, that is very high praise, Leah.  I sincerely appreciate it and I hope that I can continue to write stories you love.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2008 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

As I really love your characters, I really enjoy finding out  more about them! Great chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that, Sigi.  Thank you for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2008 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Friendship

I liked knowing more about miguel and alex but does that mean that justin and miguel have slept together? and does brian know? there is going to be some dramas going on when all these secrets get revealed

Author's Response: Well Justin, Jake and Miguel played together.  Yes, Brian knows and there won't be a drama going on with that, but there will be regarding other things.  *winks* Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

Great to read a new ep! I am so very worried about the developments about Brian's son though! I don't think there will be any secrets left for anyone once the court case is over and the 'shit really hits the fan!' Always look forward to your fic and you never disappoint! :)

Author's Response: Hey dphysh!  It's loyal, supportive readers like you and all the readers on MW that give me the inspiration to keep writing.  I hope you all know what it means to me.  Thanks!  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Ally (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

miguel and alex are really good friends when they are prepared to have things made public about themselves that they would rather keep private, what happened to alex was just awful and miguel trying to take his life is awful too, i wonder how this will affect their partners when they find out, and on to brian and justin wow now that was hot

Author's Response: Hey Ally!  I think a good story needs some angst, but I didn't want all the angst to be with Brian and Justin.  I also wanted to show that Alex and Miguel as well as Chris and Jake were true friends,  so it all works for the story.  I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 04:45 AM · On: The Demo

Oh snap! That was great chapter. I love learning more about the other characters.



Author's Response: Thanks Jackie!  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: bkfqueer (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

You never stop to amaze me. Anytime I think I know what is going to happen next I'm going to be surprised by YOU. Can't wait for all the revelations during the trial.

Author's Response: Hey bkfqueer...love that username!  I don't want to give anything away about what's going to happen, but I really hope you like how I handle it.  I do try to keep the story fun and moving so it doesn't seem to get boring or stagnant.  Thanks so much for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

Yeepeee! I'am al ittle short on time, right now so that is the only thing I will say, so once again yeepee, et vivement vendredi prochain!!! i do not exactly know how to traduct this, yhe essence is "I am really eager for next friday". And now I am late!

Bye

A



Author's Response: LOL Anne!  I'm really glad you reviewed!  I can't wait to hear from you again.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

Another wonderful chapter!  (my second time reading it!)  Cant' wait for an update.  Sounds like this custody battle is going to get very ugly...

Author's Response: Hey Gina,  I promise the custody battle will be handled and that's all I'm saying.  *grins*  Glad you liked this one. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Belle (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2008 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

Some how my review ended up on the demo chapter instead of this one. Please check that out.

Author's Response: That's okay, Belle.  I get a list of the reviews so I don't have to go through the chapters and I knew what you were talking about.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Belle (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2008 08:09 PM · On: The Demo

Wow, powerful ending and chapter. I still love how Justin is Brian's grounding point and Brian can actively seek him out for comfort. I'm interested to see Jake's reaction to the news. You have me very intrigued as always and I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey Belle,  I have a couple of things to write before we find out how Jake feels.  I'm glad you liked this chapter. Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2008 03:34 AM · On: Everyone Has Secrets

"I have faith in cole....I have faith in cole... I have faith in cole...."  lol.  I am soo biting my fingernails here!  Looks like Brian has a fight on his hands.  Can we just shoot Lindsey?  The way she is manipulating Brian!  Using her son to emotionally blackmail him!   It's criminal!   Great chapter, I'm so invested in this story!  Thanks!

Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I love hearing from you!  Thanks so much for all your support and I'm glad you're enjoying this story.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Chelly (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2008 07:35 AM · On: Everyone Has Secrets

I loved this chapter.  I don't know what angle Lindsey thought she was playing at with Brian; but, he saw right through that.  Oh, the audacity to use Brian's son against him.  Horrible!  I can't wait until next week's update!

Smooches!



Author's Response: Hey Chelly!  I love bashing Mikey and the girls...it's FUN.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Belle (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2008 01:49 AM · On: The Demo

So glad site is back I was dying without the next chapter of your fic. My heart was killing me when gus called for brian and he couldn't go!  I am glad that Brian is standing up to Lindsay and not letting her steamroll over her. Ant judge worth his/her salt will realize that two stable loving partners are better than two pychotic, maniplative bitches!

Author's Response: Hey Belle!  I've been so busy trying to get things back to normal with Jess's help.  I should be back on schedule next week.  I'm glad you're enjoying this fic.  Thanks for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Alys (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2008 05:27 AM · On: Everyone Has Secrets

Yeah!!!! Love your story. Rereading Leather bound now. Keep writing, I'm living vicariously thru you the lifestyle.

Hmmm, Love how Cole and Todd are strong and secure. Sounds like Lins has some laundry she doesn't want aired....

Looking forward to the next chapter.....

Alys 

 

 



Author's Response: Yeah, Lindz does have a few secrets and it's going to be fun exploiting those.  I'm glad you enjoy my stories and thank you so much for commenting.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: Big J (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2008 03:33 AM · On: Everyone Has Secrets

I know I reviewed this before the site crashed and forgot to say - EEK! an abortion and whose baby is it?  Hopefully we'll get another chapter soon.

Author's Response: Well I don't want to give away any details, Big J...I mean where is the fun in that?  *grins*  I have had so much going on in my RL this week and dealing with reposting...okay, no excuses.  I'll do my very best to be back on schedule for next week.  So, please forgive me.  Hugs, Rena

Reviewer: bkfqueer (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2008 08:43 PM · On: Everyone Has Secrets

Collar bound is back! I have waited the last days to read the new chapter and the first thing I find while loading the new archive is a new chapter. YEAH!!!!!!! I hope you know how many people love to read your work. As for the new chapter is Michael ever, ever going to grow up? Love the way Emmett reacts to Michael bullshit. I hope you have not to much difficulties uploading your wonderful stories again and you are able to write the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm truly humbled by the amount of support I get for my stories.  As long as there are people who like reading them, I'll keep writing them.  No, Michael will probably never grow up in my stories because I love bashing him too much...hehehe.  I should be back on schedule for next week if nothing else goes wrong.  I really appreciate all your support.  Hugs, Rena

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