Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviews For The Dark Night of Brian's Soul

Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2017 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Enter the Ghost

You've got a great thing here. Can't wait to see it finished.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 20: Just Another Night at Babylon, Part 1

I'm really enjoying this fic, I hope you'll continue it...

It's funny I have a series of fics that has a similar theme running through them...

1- McKinney set in 1880's Brian (Brett) is a genius, lawyer, doctor and the father of BDSM...

2-Flashes, Brian and Justin in current time frame of the show...

3 - Angles and Greek Gods, their in a place between heaven and earth, and can view their other lives like watching TV...

It's kind of like the string theory, with glimpse of other past lives over the century, they keep getting another chance to make things right...

Of course Its still 3 wips, and I haven't worked on it in a long, long time... But I plan to get back to it... I need to figure out how to tie all three fics together...

I just though it was really interesting that we both had some very similar themes running through our fics...

Hope for read more sometime...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
I will. I'm planning to finish all of mine.

That is weird. I should check those out (if they're posted). They sound very interesting.

I explore sort of similar themes in Taylor and The Forbidden.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 14B: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 2

You're making me cry here...

Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
That was one of the saddest things I ever wrote :-(

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 11C: Friction

Okay I'm addicted, but I have to get up early... I'm so loving this... So until tomorrow...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed

“Justin…I…I love you. I love you so fucking much…”

Sweet! So fucking sweet!!!

I'm loving this... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
... and all I had to do was torture Brian ... that's actually a pretty frequent occurrence in this fic :-D

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

All buckled up and holding on... I like weird...

Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: Enter the Ghost

I needed something good to read and I found this... I'm liking it already!

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear that :-) This one is a bit weird...though so buckle up.

Reviewer: Dee (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2013 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: Just Another Night at Babylon, Part 1

Why have you not finished this story? It is a wonderful read. I hope you eventually decide to finish it. It seems wrong to leave it like this.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: Desires...to Kill, to Love, to F***

Who in the world are these beings that want to cause Brian and Justin trouble!

I love when Brian and Justin play around.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: Brian Chooses Justin

AWWW!! Love it! Michael needs to get over himself.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Brian Chooses Justin

Girl you sure know how to write a love story. Now maybe I can get some writing done tonight. Thanks for the terrific read. Looking forward to your updates.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Day

Ah...I loved this very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 14B: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 2

Bloody brilliant chapter; loved it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 14A: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 1

Interesting development with our ghost again. I never really cared for this side of Brian as to why Justin is my favorite character in the show.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 13B: Brian's 'Darkness' Begins to Emerge

Me like a rough Brian and sumissive Justin; makes me all tinglely inside.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 13A: Justin's Poor Aching ***

I knew Justin's ass was in for it!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 12C: Godhood

A bit of Hindu and Greek gods here. I ponder why you took so much time to explain all this and wonder how the story shall evolve.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 12B: Beginnings and Endings

The gods have spoken.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 12A: Be Careful What You Wish For...

The question is can Justin's ass take the price?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 11D: Four Voices

ha ha ha! Angst with B/J is always classic.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 11C: Friction

Brian can be such an asshole.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 11B: A Little Birdy Told Me...

Ahhhhh! I liked this chapter very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 11A: Kaila Takes Charge

Now it makes sense to me and it's very interesting how this is unfolding.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Entities

What now? This came out of left field.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 9: A New Strategy

Serous moment but you closed it perfectly.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8: Post-Pillow Talk Action

Those boys know how to do it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 7: A Little Pre-Action Pillow Talk

The greatest love story ever told is Brian and Justin and you tell it wonderfully.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 6: Enter a Second Ghost

The supernatural touch is excellent here. As suspected you gave enough clues to know the ghosts in advance.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Freak Out and an X-Rated Phone Call

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
i SO HATE ETHAN! LOVED IT!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed

Perfect; perfect chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 3: Jacob Taylor

Wow! Love the parallel of the relationships. Great imagination here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

Kool chapter! Your recall of canon is excellent! I love the developing plot; not going to get much writing done tonight!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: Enter the Ghost

Damn you; I'm suppose to be writing and I had to go start another one of your excellent stories and it's all your damn fault!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 16: Brian Chooses Justin

Awww! That was such a cute chapter! I'm loving this story! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the new chapter!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :) :) :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Day

Oh my god! That's so sweet. I can't wait to read more! I love that Brian now realizes that they both need eachother and that he'll do anything to be with the one he loves. I look forward to read more tomorrow.
Keep up the great work!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 15: A New Day

Just caught up reading. Brian thankfully chose Justin. Now how much will Justin freak about the house. How much more will Brian change/ be his real self? Can't wait to see.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 14B: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 2

OMG! Such a great chapter! I always hated that Brian felt Justin was better off without him. Brian was as much Justin's life/light as Justin was Brian's.
As much as Brian's family gives him a hard time, they have to admit their lives would be so different without him.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 14B: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 2

Excellent! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 14A: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 1

This should be interesting! Brian seeing how different everyone's life would be if he weren't a part of it.
The self loathing he does is so sad and painful, but it comes from the little boy inside him that was heartbroken by his parents...or so they are called.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 14A: It's a Wonderful Life, Part 1

No need to be nervous. This was a good chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Brian's life would be like without Justin. I hope it gets through to Brian's head afterwards. Those 2 are destined for eachother.
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 13B: Brian's 'Darkness' Begins to Emerge

As worried as Brian is of hurting Justin, deep down he knows he would never hurt him.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 13B: Brian's 'Darkness' Begins to Emerge

I think if all are agreed a little role play never hurt anyone and it's hot as hell.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 13A: Justin's Poor Aching ***

Justin always was an overachiever wasn't he!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 13A: Justin's Poor Aching ***

It's funny but I am having a hard time feeling sorry for Justin...not sure why? LOL!

Author's Response: I wouldn't mind having his problem, either :D

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 12C: Godhood

Endless love and sacrifice...perfect.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 12C: Godhood

Great chapters!

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 12A: Be Careful What You Wish For...

WOW great update i so want to read more of this,I am sure that Justin can handle all of Brian. Bring it on!!!!!, please update soon

Many Hugs Buffytess

Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!
Justin is especially skilled at 'Brian-handling'
:D :D :D

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 12A: Be Careful What You Wish For...

I has somehow missed the last couple of chapters. I am glad to all caught up and love the developments.

Author's Response:
I'm happy that you are excited about what is to come :) :) :)
(truth be told, I am, too)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 12A: Be Careful What You Wish For...

I hope Justin will be able to handle whatever Brian plans to dish out. We know he can usually handle Brian, but it sounds like Brian plans to wear the boy out.

Author's Response:
Brian does have a twisted sense of humor...
:D :D :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 11D: Four Voices

That seems to be helping a bit. And did Brian actually say I love you out loud? Wow!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 11A: Kaila Takes Charge

Access into each others inner thoughts! Can't wait to see what comes of that!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Entities

Well that was so much fun. I have just read the whole thing and wanted to go to the next chapter, not realising it was at 10. I just got so engaged, well done.

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the great compliment! :) :) :)
I hope you enjoy the newest chapter!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2008 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Entities

DAMN YOU !!! I'M INTO SIX STORIES ON THIS SITE AND 4 OF THE 6 BELONG TO YOU!!!
HOW DO YOU DO IT!?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: Sometimes I forgo sleep to write. I enjoy it so much :)

Reviewer: SS (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Entities

DAMN YOU!!! I'm into six stories on the site. 4 of the 6 BELONG TO YOU!!!!
1. You Got WAY TO MUCH TIME ON YOUR HANDS LOL!!!
2. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!
3. HOW DO YOU DO IT?

Author's Response:
I really don't have too much in the way of extra time. But I love writing B/J stories so much that I make it fit into my schedule.
I'm so glad you are enjoying most of my stories :)

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 9: A New Strategy

Honey!
You sure know how to deliver them sex scenes. Are you sure you're not a man? And what's with so many stories going on at the same time...? I thought does the 7 in you pseudonym mean that you are actually 7 people in one?
So just in case I have not made my self clear, you totally rock I love love love your writing. (Please update soon - all of them)
<3 Edda.

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the compliment :) :) :)
I'm not sure what to say about sex scenes. I actually get very nervous when I write them (though I do enjoy the task). I try very hard to make them unique in some way, but I'm never sure whether I've succeeded until I get feedback.
The reason I have so many ongoing stories is that I have too many ideas floating around in my head begging to get out (and I hate endings).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Entities

Wow, so there's a third soul to the whole Jacob/William story! Great chapter and love the new banner!

Author's Response:
Yeah..the banner is awesome :)
I'm happy you are still finding the story interesting!
I hope you enjoy the newest!

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2008 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Entities

2 pairs of lost souls!!!! Hope they will help each other find true love...
Thanks and more please

Author's Response:
I'm so happy you found this part interesting (and that you enjoy the newest chapter).
:) :) :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 9: A New Strategy

Atta boy Justin, show Brian that no trick can do to him what you do! Now, I hope Brian stops behaving like a little shit...yea, I know tall wish there =)

Author's Response: Yeah...unfortunately, Brian's gonna keep 'acting out' until he and Justin resolve more of their issues...but Justin's bold move pushed them a little further in the right direction.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 9: A New Strategy

justin is so understanding with Brian!! And he's determined now that Brian told him how much Brian loves him!!!!
Thanks

Author's Response: Yes, Brian's declaration definitely gave Justin a reason (and the energy) to fight for his man :) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 9: A New Strategy

justin certainly knows how to go after and get what he wants. but the end, sounds ominous,

Author's Response: Justin does know how to handle Brian, but he resents having to do it so often. Brian and Justin definitely have more issues to resolve, but don't worry, in time, they will :) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: Post-Pillow Talk Action

hot! the fiddler will never stand in their way again.

Author's Response: Indeed not. Justin finally has better footing in he and Brian's relationship. That coupled with his deep love for Brian will keep Justin by Brian's side.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Post-Pillow Talk Action

That was hot! I can understand Brian's feelings being all over the place right now. Its obvious how the events of that evening took a toll on him emotionally. But he knows that Justin loves him, so I hope things will be ok with them.

Author's Response: Knowing, really knowing, that Justin loves Brian is going to take Brian a long way (has already taken him a long way), but his jealousy and resentment from Justin's 'betrayals' will continue to gnaw at him. What Justin sometimes forgets is that Brian has insecurities plaguing him, too. The jealousy/resentment just makes them worse. He and Justin will need to deal with that, and probably very soon.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 7: A Little Pre-Action Pillow Talk

Good talk! I'm glad they got to do that before they started having sex. Now they can try to move forward.

Author's Response: It's definitely a step in the right direction! I hated how B/J on the show (very often) neglected to deal with their insecurities/hurts...just reuniting and then being surprised when things fell apart again.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 7: A Little Pre-Action Pillow Talk

aawww!!!

Author's Response: :D :D :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 6: Enter a Second Ghost

WHOA! William was a Kinney! Oh my! So Brian and Justin were pre-destined to be together (well, of course), but so were others in their family....all soul mates. Very interesting!
I want to know more about this sacrafice Jacob made and when he finally acknowledge his love for William.

Author's Response:
I think William's family background surprised everyone :)
I can't wait until you read Ch. 11A. You are going to be super-psyched (I think). It delves deeper into Brian and Justin being predestined to love one another.

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Enter a Second Ghost

Beautiful!!!
Thanks and more...

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this part :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Freak Out and an X-Rated Phone Call

ethan should count himself lucky. it isn't everyday that someone can here brian tell justin he loves him.....even after a hot blowjob.
i'm so glad justin didn't let brian get away with his usual bullshit. yay justin.

Author's Response:
Justin certainly handled Brian's little freakout well :) He's a natural at Brian-handling :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Freak Out and an X-Rated Phone Call

Yea, I would say that Ethan lost...big time! Doesn't get more final than hearing your "love" giving his true love a blow job.
OK, I just breezed through these! I need more now!! Please =)

Author's Response:
Indeed...that's about as final as you get :D :D :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed

Good, lots of truths have come out finally! Things they needed to know.

Author's Response: Indeed!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 3: Jacob Taylor

I'm just speechless! You do that to me a lot!! =) Wow, I guess this can go under the category "those who don't learn from history, are doomed to repeat it".
Ok, I guess not that speechless =)

Author's Response:
Wow! That's a great compliment! (blushing) :D :D :D
That's the perfect category heading :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

That was so heart wrentching! I hope this is finally giving Brian a clue as to why Justin did what he did.
Can't wait to see how Justin knows of the ghost!

Author's Response: It was sad to write, too, but necessary for Brian's growth (this will help Brian understand Justin's actions better, but he still has a long way to go).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: Enter the Ghost

I'm hooked already!

Author's Response: Cool :)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Freak Out and an X-Rated Phone Call

Brian deserves a crown or tiara for his little drama queen moment lol. Very hot but I almost feel sorry for Ethan, but then you think well this is what happens when you get involved with someone that already has a partner.

Author's Response:
I know, I'm evil :D :D :D
I torment Ian whenever I can. I hate him in all incarnations.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2008 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed

wow.... you made me speechles. great update :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thanks for the great compliment (blushing) :D :D :D

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2008 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed

Im so happy Brian told Justin he loves him

Author's Response:
About dang time!
:D :D :D

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed

jacob is certainly doing his job of keeping these two together. entering justin's body to make him see how much brian loved him.
and i was so happy that they were on the right track. then you broke my heart a bit.
“I’ve loved you since the day we met, and I’ve told you countless times. How could you think i didn't?"
“No one has ever really meant it before.”
did i tell you i love this story.

Author's Response:
I'm so happy you are continuing to enjoy this story :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 3: Jacob Taylor

nicely done.
i'm surprised that it was justin's uncle who was like brian and not william.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this part :)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2008 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 3: Jacob Taylor

this ghost is awesome helping Brian to realize stuff before its too late

Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking the ghost :)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

hey, another great story.... I love your stories. they are really sweet :-)) rose

Author's Response: That's so wonderful to hear :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

i gather that brian didn't like that glimpse into their lives. the ghost is certainly right. if you mental abuse someone long enough they'll eventually start to believe it. can brian make amends before it's too late? i sure as hell hope so.
great chapter violette, as usual.

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the compliment :)
No...Brian didn't enjoy that mini-tour...

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

I noticed it said kyle not kip but I started thinking maybe his real name was kyle and kip was his nickname lol so you had me believing it :)

Author's Response:
That's funny :) :)
Sorry about the confusion.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: Less Than Fond Memories

come on Brian, you can get sunshine back

Author's Response:
Sorry about my freudian slip, if you noticed it :) (calling Kip, Kyle) I was watching South Park right before I wrote this. lol.
I hope you liked this part :)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Enter the Ghost

I love this, Brians smartass answers and the ghost is a smartass too lol, update soon

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this part :)

Reviewer: kleene87 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: Enter the Ghost

Only one our to get Brian to come to his senses? I'm really curious how he will do that. ;)

Author's Response:
I hope the second chapter is a good start (to getting Brian to come to his senses)
:) :)

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