Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 04:06 PM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
Oh my that was scary huh. That mad man really went out of his way to get to the boys didn’t he. Thank goodness for Brian’s and Justin’s thinking and quick moves.
I loved LOVED how the story moved on and the relationship blossomed even more so. Such a romantic aren’t you and I love it. Our boys are happy and safe and that’s what counts the most.
Thank you you for this incredible story 🌸🌸🌸
Author's Response: Unfortunately for Johan, you can't beat a couple who work together so perfectly... in or out of bed. LOL! Now it is time for our lovers to relax and enjoy their freedom to be together without any fear from a mad killer. Thank you again for taking the time to give me so much wonderful feedback, Vicki. You have made me very happy about writing this story. Huge warm hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 02:47 PM · On: The Trap is Set
I am so happy Debbie took it well and is willing to help them. They are so much in love and their desire to catch the killer is so strong. I pray their plan will work and no one will get hurt.
Author's Response: Our Debbie would never turn her back on someone in need. She is often my unsung hero in stories. Now that Brian and Justin have things set up, all they need is their prey to step into the trap. One more chapter will reveal all. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 02:37 PM · On: A Eureka Moment!
I could feel Justin vibrating with excitement as he was telling Brian of his plan. He was probably hoping like the energizer bunny 🐰 lol. I could picture Brian trying not to grin as he tried to calm Justin down to hear his plan properly lol. I hope thatDebbie does listen to Justin and not be mad at him and if course help him. Excellent excellent chapter x
Author's Response: The tables have turned for Johan. He now has two men to contend with, and maybe even more once Debbie learns the whole truth. I'm so glad this story is still giving you pleasure, Vicki. Thank you so much for checking it out. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 08:41 AM · On: Some of the Mystery Unraveling
Oooh the plot is getting even more intense, I’m glad Brian now has that information and pictures now. Hopefully it will help in getting his hands on him and sorting him out Kinney style. Brilliant work x
Author's Response: It was time for the good guys to catch a break. Now that they know who they are fighting, it may make all the difference. More of that coming up. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 08:26 AM · On: Figuring Some Things Out
Happy contented sigh that was simply beautiful between them. I loved how Brian was with him it made me smile. You do that so much with your stories so thank you for that. I can’t wait to see what’s next x
Author's Response: It is so easy for me to write Brian and Justin as more than just casual lovers. They are connected in more than the physical way alone. I believe in soul mates, and these two are 100% that, no matter which story I put them into. Thank you so much for your comments. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2019 07:26 AM · On: Finally Arriving in More Ways than One
It’s so good to see that Justin feels safe knowing Brian is watching his back. I am however worried that the evil so in so is still on his trail. What will he do next. Thank you for putting in hotness, that scene between Vrian and Justin was so sexy and it was a great way to wake up.
Author's Response: I felt it was time for Brian and Justin to connect, since it was obvious what was going on between them (not to mention that the readers had waited long enough LOL). It is going to make all the difference for Justin now that he has someone in his corner watching his back. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 07:32 PM · On: An Ally, At Last
😮😮 oh god I was so scared, I could feel the fear that ran right through Justin and a Brian in those moments. I was trembling reading this. You did a seriously amazing job with this. It was like watching a movie.
Author's Response: Telling me that this chapter was like watching a movie is the ultimate compliment. I always try to envision every scene I write as if I was watching it in a movie, so I thank you so very much for your words. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 04:15 PM · On: The Eyes of Truth
I’m am on the edge of my sea now. The hunt is really on with the two men now and I’m worried as to which will get there first. I loved when Brian and Justin Locke’s eyes, I could feel the spark and heat between them. Gosh I’m loving this . Xx
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, because it really gave me a hard time. There were times when I almost gave up on the story, but I'm a stubborn old gal and hate giving up. LOL! Happily, I finally got my groove back and the story continued. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 03:25 PM · On: The Search is Still On
Omg 😮 Justin is in real danger. What the heck is he gonna do. If Brian finds him will he protect him. Holy moly this is fabulous xx
Author's Response: Justin is blissfully unaware that he is danger in more ways than one. Hopefully, he will survive this train trip. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 02:27 PM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
That is a long train journey I think I’d be wreaked from it. Justin is doing a great job so far at staying in hiding. Locking eyes with Brian was magical and I loved that Bryan’s was freaked out lol. Will he figure out its Justin. Loved this x
Author's Response: There has always been a kind of magic that happens whenever Brian and Justin lock eyes with each other. That thought fit in perfectly with a first 'meeting' between the two men. But it is only the beginning. There are still many more miles to travel on this particular train ride. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 01:41 PM · On: Two Ships Passing in the Night
Wow this is getting more and more intense and interesting. A new plot twist as well. I hope Justin will be ok. My heart is going out to him.
Author's Response: This chapter is especially dear to me because it is the very first time that my dear friend, Judy, took on the job of being my beta. She has been my only beta ever since and I owe her a huge debt for her excellent work. Yes, there is a new plot twist, and it will change everything for both the detective and his target, Justin. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 01:04 PM · On: The Masquerade Begins
I wonder will Debbie find out that Sunny is a Justin and what will she do if she flies. Oh deary me Brian saw the info eeesh. Love if this x
Author's Response: Unfortunately (or maybe not) Brian is one heck of a great detective. So Justin needs to watch his back cause Brian is on his trail. As for Debbie, well she is very perceptive, but also very trusting so only time will tell if she catches on to the disguise. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 12:55 PM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
Poor Justin, I can’t imagine how scared he must be. I know that I wouldn’t be able to stop shaking. However I bet he looked really cute as a girl lol. I do hope and pray that if Brian finds him that he believes him.
Author's Response: If anyone could look good in drag, it has to be our beloved baby-faced Justin. I was hoping my Amy could add a pic of Justin in a dress to the banner, but this was quite a while back and she didn't have the skills yet to do so. But I have no doubt that my readers would have the imagination to picture it for themselves. LOL! Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2019 06:23 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
Oh my my my Justin is in a real pickle isn’t he. I’m glad he turned down to do what they asked of him but now omg wha the heck. Is running really the answer. I hope they figure out that he didn’t do it. Lol I wannna see him dressed up for sure I bet he is cute.
Author's Response: Running may not have been the best choice, but at that moment poor Justin just couldn't think straight. He needs time to get away and think things out. Luckily he has a true friend who believes in him and is willing to help in any way she can. Sio very glad you are checking out this story, Vicki. I always get excited hearing from you. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2013 09:29 AM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
Brilliant adaptation of a great classic movie. I loved it! Thanks for writing! TAG
Author's Response: This was the first story that gave me all kinds of trouble. It was so important that I stick closely to an authentic 1930's feel to the story, as well as making it a tribute (but not an exact copy) of such a great classic film. That turned out to be a lot harder than I thought it would be, so your comments are even more wonderful. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story, Tag. Thank you so much. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 05:22 PM · On: The Eyes of Truth
The dazzling smile gave him away! For once the smile is a liability, I can't believe it!
Author's Response: I thought it over and decided that nothing would be more revealing, especially to a sharp-eyed cop, than Justin's amazing smile and/or gorgeous blue eyes. I'm glad you saw that too. Thanks again for all your terrific comments, Weave the Magic. They have truly made me happy. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 05:05 PM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
How funny if Brian thinks he is now a heterosexual because of Sunshine! Teeheehee!
Author's Response: This was a fun chapter to write. There is nothing more confusing, I suspect, than finding yourself attracted to a gender that has never attracted you before and not knowing why. Poor Brian. Hee hee! Glad you had fun with this chapter, Weave the Magic. Warm hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 04:36 PM · On: The Masquerade Begins
Sunny, I like that a lot. Your plot is getting so interesting. I wonder if Brian will fall for Sunny.
Author's Response: Whoops, forgot to check out your next comment before responding to the first one...so it looks like you approve of the name, Sunny. I am so glad, Weave the Magic. It just seemed like the perfect fit for our 'Sunshine Smile' boy. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 04:11 PM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
Why not Justine? It's a girl's name too....but whether it's Justina or Justine, I wish I could see how Justin look as a female. :)
Author's Response: I think if anyone would look gorgeous as a female, it is Justin. I hope you like the name I came up with for him to use in his masquerade. Thank you for commenting on this story too, Weave the Magic. Warm hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2012 01:50 AM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
I just finished this great fic and would love to see Justin as a girl! I love the movie that inspired you and how you got with the theme.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Sisa. I loved imagining Justin dressed as a girl while writing this. I remember what a great job the producers did while dressing Michael as a girl and I think they would have succeeded just as well with Justin. 'Some Like it Hot' is among my favorite films from that era, so I doubly appreciate your comment concerning the way I interpreted it for a Brian/Justin story. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2012 09:41 AM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
This is another story I sadly overlooked in reviewing although I have read this at least twice. This is one of the most romantic ones I have read. It's a classic to me.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comments, No Sleep. I really appreciate it. My middle name is romance, so I am particularly happy to hear you classify it as a romantic story. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 01:09 AM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
This was a wonderful story. I love the idea of singing!Justin in drag! Thanks, grammy!
Author's Response: I have to admit that I stole the idea of Justin singing from Randy's real life. Randy has a wonderful voice, although it is anything but feminine. I also have to admit that this was one of my hardest stories to write. I ended up developing writer's block with the story around chapter ten and had to set it aside for months until my muse finally woke up and I was able to complete it. That's why generous comments like yours means so much to me. The harder I struggle with a story, the more grateful I am that someone enjoys it. It makes the struggles worthwhile. Thank you so much. Warmest huggles (I read your page and I'm more than happy to hear ghosty noises when you're around..LOL!), Grammy
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 11:20 PM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
Another wonderful story. I finally got around to reading it on my kindle and I couldn't sleep until I finished reading it. Our boys certainly had a rough time back then. Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: What wonderful cmments, Cheryl. This is the one story that gave me such a hard time with constant bouts of writer's block, so I'm always delighted to know when someone found it fun to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know. With much appreciation and huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 06:49 PM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
Thanks grammy I have just read this and it was as usual a wonderful read xxChris
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed this story, Chris. It has been the hardest one for me to write but I could not give up on it. All stories must have an ending. Thank you so much for being patient with this often-delayed story. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 06:50 PM · On: The Trap Is Sprung
Another wonderful Grammy production completed! Thank you for this delightful read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me skip to the end, Bob, but I have to tell you that all your comments were wonderful and I appreciate every one of them. I did leave a much longer reply on Chapter One for you. Thank you again for your thoughtful feedback. It is truly appreciated. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 06:26 PM · On: The Trap is Set
They had their moment on the beach :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 06:17 PM · On: A Eureka Moment!
Things are moving forward very quickly now.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 06:11 PM · On: Some of the Mystery Unraveling
Intense developments here; must read on and finish this story today.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Figuring Some Things Out
Nice they got that out of the way. Reading on and very happy this is completed too.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Finally Arriving in More Ways than One
Go Justin! Get that man!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:40 PM · On: An Ally, At Last
Brian falls for Justin even in the roaring 30s. Sweet!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:26 PM · On: The Eyes of Truth
Tension building up.... reading on....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:15 PM · On: The Search is Still On
The plot thickens....Cuba was a very popular spot in the 30s. Good research.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:02 PM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
Now the villan appears....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Two Ships Passing in the Night
Now the drama begins....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:35 PM · On: The Masquerade Begins
Dumb girl leaving evidence laying out in the open.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:12 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
I don't know how this one got passed me. I truly love a good period piece and you write the best ones I've seen. Often I have thought of you and considered to write you offering to visit since I'm not far from you love (Greenville area further east out Interstate 30)
Small world huh? :)
Author's Response: This one probably got past you because it took me over a year to complete. It did teach me one thing...murder mysteries are not my forte'. LOL! I made a promise that I would never leave a story incompleted so I hung in there despite all the mental blocks that popped up. I wrote and re-wrote chapter after chapter until I was satisfied and I'm so glad you enjoyed the end result. I value your opinon, Bob.
I love to write period pieces because it gives me the chance to learn so many new things thanks to research that I do in order to be as accurate as humanly possible. Eventually I plan to tackle a story set in America in the mid to late 1800's. That one will be really interesting to me for the research.
My door is always open to you, my friend. All I need is a heads up so I can corral the crazy ladies I live with...my thirty something Daughter, her ex-girlfriend turned boarder, my 16 years old future chef Granddaughter, and my 17 year old future author Granddaughter who has shown remarkable talent in writing yaoi and yuri anime love stories and creating the wildest fantasy worlds I've ever seen. Add our 3 cats and harrassed dog to the mix and you'll find quite an adventure. We'll be happy to put the kettle on for you anytime.
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. They are always welcome by me so that I can know what my reader is thinking. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2011 07:59 AM · On: The Trap is Set
more breathing room now that debbie knows. i'm not crazy about justin being a sitting duck either, but i know brian won't let him get hurt.
can't wait to see how it all goes down.
Author's Response: Not everything is as it appears, so be prepared for a surprise where our 'sitting duck' is concerned, Sophie's Mom. Debbie, as always, will do her job quite well. Thank you so much for your support and patience with this story. I really hope you enjoy the ending. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 11:37 PM · On: A Eureka Moment!
great chapter. hope their plan works out the way they plan without anyone gettting hurt. about time debbie heard the truth.
Author's Response: It is going to be almost as difficult confessing to Debbie as it will be facing Johan, but Justin has no choice. At least he isn't on his own anymore. Brian's only concern is protecting Justin from harm, so he'll be with his young lover all the way. Thank you so much for sticking with my story, Sophie's Mom. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 06:54 PM · On: A Eureka Moment!
yeapee an update.
looing forward to more
Author's Response: This story has taken a long time to come together, but things are finally coming to a head, 087Blue. I can't thank you enough for sticking with it. The confrontation is next. See you then. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 09:27 PM · On: A Eureka Moment!
This story is sizzling. Can't wait to see if the trap works and if Justin remembers where he's met Johan.
Telling Miss Debbie is going to prove an interesting chapter.
Author's Response: It is all coming to a head, YumYumPM. If Brian and Justin don't stop Johan now they will have no choice but to either part while Brian goes back to New York, or both return to New York as suspect and cop, or both go on the run. None of those options are attractive so our boys are going to do whatever it takes to get this thing over with. That includes facing the music with Debbie and enlisting her help. See you then. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 03:16 AM · On: A Eureka Moment!
great story i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story
i hope brian keeps justin safe
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments, Jm c. Brian's only goal is to free Justin of suspicion and keep him safe at the same time, and you know how determined Brian can be when he wants something. I'm working on the next chapter now and hope to have it ready soon. Hug, Grammy
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Figuring Some Things Out
laying the ground work for their growing relationship. great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, Sophie's Mom. It may have been sudden, but there are some forces that simply can't be denied. Who knows where things can lead once Justin is out of danger. Time will tell. Warm hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Finally Arriving in More Ways than One
Just wanted ta say welcome back to my favorite writer!! You've indeed been missed and I hope things are better..I can't wait to read this latest chapter I was doing the happy dance when I saw your name so I'll go back and read the story...
Author's Response: I am so very grateful to you for not giving up on me, Jasmine. I promise you that I will not abandon this story again. Life is beginning to settle down for me finally and I have more time and energy to devote to writing again. I am still having some writer's block problems with this story but I won't let that stop me. I have other stories waiting to be told but they will have to wait until this one is complete. More coming up soon as I'm well into the next chapter. See you then. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:01 AM · On: An Ally, At Last
The last three chapters were made of awesomeness. It's great that Brian knows what going on and is willing to help Justin. Hopefully they'll catch the guy before any damage is made. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment Jackie. Thank you so much. The boys know it is a big risk using Justin as a pawn, but he'll never clear his name unless Brian can catch the real killer and prove why he did the evil deed. That will take a bit of hard work, but the boys will have to work really close together to reach their goal. More of the mystery coming up. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2009 11:41 PM · On: An Ally, At Last
OMG!I'm so glad Justin is now save with Brian and that Brian believe Justin.Can't wait for their first kiss and more!
Big hugs,Meggi
Author's Response: Your patience with this story will be rewarded with this next chapter Meggi. I promise you that. Brian and Justin will be working very closely to solve the crime....very very closely. Stay tuned and thank you so much for commenting. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:40 PM · On: An Ally, At Last
It's good that Brian is going to protect Justin and they have everything out in the open now.
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more Sara. Now that Brian and Justin have an understanding, no telling what else will develop between them as they try and figure out how to identify and capture Johan. Things will move fast now that they are in the city of bright lights and dreams. Thanks so much for your comments. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:13 AM · On: An Ally, At Last
whew that was a close one. that guy is not going to give up. good thing brian plans on staying close, but i got the feeling he really isn't going to mind...eventually. same goes for justin. wait until brian realizes that justin's gay. whoa baby.
Author's Response: You have been so patient with this story Sherrie so I promise a big reward in the next chapter where Brian does indeed discover that his new friend/no longer suspect is as interested in him as he is with the young artist. Let the fireworks begin. LOL! Thank you so much for the comments. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 11:53 AM · On: The Eyes of Truth
Justin has no idea that his fate lies in two people who have been searching for him and finally figured out his secret. I hope Brian gets to him first and at least allows Justin to explain what happened.
Author's Response: Luck has not been too kind to Justin so far but maybe fate will turn his luck around. Serious doings are coming up Kat so be prepared. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2009 03:35 AM · On: The Eyes of Truth
I so hope Brian gets to Justin first,because Johann means much more trouble than Brian.
And everything only because of Justins beautiful blue eyes.
I love the story so much. *sigh*
Big hugs,Meggi
Author's Response: I am so thrilled that you are enjoying this story Meggi. This was the first time I ran into writer's block while writing this chapter but the story finally started flowing again. I can promise you that the 'heat' is finally turning up now and more than one person is about to be burned. Thank you so very much for your review Meggi. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:20 PM · On: The Eyes of Truth
getting closer to the suspensible revealing. i'm all tingly.
poor cherry, doesn't stand a chance with our detective. oh if she only knew.
Author's Response: I can promise you that there will be lots of revelations in the next chapter Sherrie. As for Cherry....well at least she made a life long friend on the train, if not a romance. LOL! Thanks so much for the comments. They are always appreciated. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Two Ships Passing in the Night
So Brian, Justin and the killer on on the same train! I hope Justin starts to remember something about that hand.
Hmm, Brian's already starting to see something in Justin and he hasn't even met him yet. That didn't take long :)
Author's Response: Now that all the players in this little drama are in place, things are about to pop. Watch for some big surprises to happen to all concerned. Thanks so much for commenting Kat. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:42 AM · On: The Search is Still On
brian gaydar must be off if he can't see justin's adam apple. but i like the way he thinks about him. as for johan, that day is never going to come. and his girlfriend may never get that "hefty stone".
nice chapter grammy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your patience with this story Sherrie. I have to spend more time on each chapter than most due to researching the period and this time around I didn't like the way I handled the layover so I had to redo it. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and will work on being more timely with its updates. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2009 02:29 AM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
Poor Brian,if he think his dick suddenly like pussy,maybe he should ask "Justine" on a date or see a shrink, *gggg*
Amazing chapter,can't wait for more!
Thanks so much,hugs,Meggi
Author's Response: It is a shame that Brian is so tired he hasn't caught on to why the 'female' singer is so attractive to him. But don't worry. He's a pretty smart detective and that could change at any time. Thank you again for joining me on MW Meggi. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:22 PM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
My dear Grammy,
everytime I´ve finished reading a chapter of this story I´m sad because it´s over. This one not only gave us some facts about Debbie and her family( bytheway a nice way to introduce Michael and Vic and you´re staying as close to canon as you probably could ) but also the first encounter of Brian and Justin we were so patiently waiting for. It was obvious to see that Justin made a big impression on Brian ("What the hell was that?") and I´m anticipating anxiously for their next meeting.
I could so sympathize with Justin when he had to put on his bra. (“They were so uncomfortable.”). (Un)fortunatley I don´t have much I need to tame by a bra so I seldom wear one but instead let gravity have its way with them. LOL
That reminds my of the “Aunt Mildred joke” you sent me a while ago. Hilarious!
I had to laugh really hard when I read “...he patted his package lovingly.” That´s sooo Brian. I could see him standing there talking to “little Brian” trying to sooth him by promising some action later.
What more can I say about this chapter? I loved it. Plain and simple.
I sent you a letter. A real one. One you had to put in an envelope, a stamp on it and carry to the postal office to ship/fly it to you. Hopefully it will get to you before it starts snowing. Which is likely to happen here any day because it´s still too cold, too rainy, too cloudy, too...too...too...you get my drift. Maybe I should make the best of it and start buying christmas presents.
Thanks for your offer to contact Elsa Rose for me but I guess I´ll send her an Em@il vis her contact adress. That´s point 27 on my to do list.LOL
I wish you a wonderful day. I imagine you sitting with your laptop on your balcony enjoying the sight, the sun, a gentle breeze and life in general.
Big huge hugs, Sunny.
Author's Response: My dear Sunny, you know exactly how to make my day as bright as a newly minted penny. Your comments are always so kind and thoughtful. I can't tell you how happy I am that you are pleased with the way the story is going. As you know, I think of it as your story in particular. I felt that Debbie needed some back story as she is very important to the boys in the future. You do know where I got that patting of the package scene, don't you? Remember when Brian's mom came to visit him when he was impotent. I loved how he patted himself in appreciation when his anger at her caused a joyous 'uplifting' of his problem. I pictured that as I wrote the scene. LOL!
I wish I could say I have nothing to stuff into those uncomfortable bras. Unfortuanately Mother Nature was too generous with me. Grrr!! I am so excited about getting your letter. Usually all we get in the 'snail' mail is bills and ads. A loving letter would be a big treat. I will eagerly await it. Btw, would you like me to ship you some of our weather. It is over 100 degrees here every day now. I don't go out on the balcony as much because of the heat but I will once it eases off. At least I can still see the glorious out of doors through the large patio door and window while sitting on the couch in front of my computer. That is better than nothing. Again thanks so much for your comments. Btw, Amy just finished the banner for 'Trapeze'. Yes, that story is next. Hope you will like it too.
Big hugs and much love, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:37 AM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
Brian and his package was perfect. I love Brian is so confused and enthralled by Justun. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Poor Brian is confused now, but I have the feeling that won't last long. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments Jackie. More coming very soon. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Samantha (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:22 AM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all the chapters of this story and am looking forward to reading more. Your are very talented writer :)
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay in responding to your very kind review Samantha. I appreciate your comments very much. I hope you will continue to enjoy future episodes from this story. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 04:14 PM · On: A Lovely Face in the Crowd
The line about Brian 'patting his package lovingly' made me laugh, thats so Brian.
This story is so interesting and poor Brian thinking he is going crazy being attracted to a lady but he will be ok once he realises that lady is not such a lady after all, lol.
Author's Response: Your comments are so wonderful Sara. Thank you so much. Actually I was thinking about that time in Brian's office when his mother inspired him to finally get his mojo back after the cancer had caused his impotence. I could just picture him patting himself and saying thank you. Of course this time he is confused as to why the 'woman' made him feel that way. LOL! He'll figure it out soon...after all he IS a detective. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Two Ships Passing in the Night
I'm really liking this story. I can't wait to see what happens when Brian see's Sunny. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Aww Jackie, I am so pleased to know you are enjoying this story. Poor Brian has no idea what is in store for him when he spots the attractive 'girl' singer in the all girl orchestra. LOL! Stay tuned for some confusing feelings. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Two Ships Passing in the Night
I hope Brian can protect Justin. I like this story, it's really interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara. This story hasn't caught on with everyone but I enjoy the mystery of it and I hope you will continue to find it interesting in the future. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Two Ships Passing in the Night
I loved it! Keep up the great work! I eagerly await the next chapter. I can't wait until Brian and Justin meet. I hope the friend of the chief is a good guy. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I'm so happy to have such a nice review for this story. It hasn't caught on like some others but I love going back in time with our boys. There is a big clue that I threw out concerning the Chief's friend....the crooked finger. Hmmmm, could that be saying something about whether he is friend or foe? We'll soon see. Thank you again Vikinglass. I always love hearing from you. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:43 PM · On: The Masquerade Begins
My Dear Grammy, Oh my God, what can I say. I feel so honored. You put a smile on my face that´s still there. Since you told me you would change Justin´s name into one not as suspicious as Justina and it would sound a bit like MMs character in SLIH (Sugar) I thought about it but couldn´t come up with one. To see you gave him the name Sunny in dedication to me was such a big surprise. Thank you so much for that it means the world to me. It´s also a name which really suits him and the explanation why he stayed a blond was plausible too. I hope Chambers is a common name like Smith or Miller and the connection to Justin´s best friend won´t be too obvious. Sorry, I guess I´m worrying too much. I had to laugh out loud when I read the first lines cause I always have trouble walking on high heels and the strap of my purse is always slipping down too. I avoid them like the plague. I´m more the sportive kind of girl. I like my jeans, tees and some sneakers. I guess I´ll still use a messanger bag even when I´m 80 years old. I also tent to board the wrong car too so I could very well relent to that. I guess besides being nervous, scared and frightened he had to be annoyed with this situation. The most difficult part is to stay calm to put on a mask and become invisible. Seeing the newspaper headline didn´t help his state of mind either. I could clearly see the scene when Justin tried to climb on his bed and Debbie entering the car. I think she´s perfect for that character. And that you got Michael and Vic on board was a nice idea too. I would like to see Michael put the moves on “Sunny” and not getting anywhere with “her”. But I guess he´s gay in this story too so that has to remain in my imagination only. Being the replacement for the singer was a brilliant and convincing idea. I would have had my problems to see him playing the trumpet or the piano all of a sudden. Nobody would expect that Justin would put himself in the focus of the audience so in a twisted kind of way standing in the spotlight can be a means to become invisible. Brian is a very experienced cop so he could easily sense that Daphne was hiding something and not telling the truth. The trick with the glass of water still worked in 1938. Today I hope everybody knows that you never let a stranger in your apartment and if you´d do it never let them out of your sight. I´m a very mistrustful person and wouldn´t believe anything. Even a badge couldn´t convince me. But I´m digressing... I guess it´s safe to say that Brian will try to get on the train and I guess then the interesting part of this story will begin. I can hardly wait for the first time Brian and Sunny/Justin will meet. Am I allowed to let my imagination run wild for a bit? I would like to see the sparks fly between Brian and Sunny immediatley. Sunny can´t act on his attraction to Brian for obvious reasons and Brian seeing himself being attracted to a woman for the first time in his life starting to second guess his sexuality. Michael falling madly in lust with Brian and following him everywhere. Brian getting annoyed by the situation and by Michael. Michael getting angry at Sunny for steeling time and attention of HIS Brian. Sunny having problems to stay in his role and to fight his attraction to Brian. Yeah, you´re right DRAMA is my middlename.LOL Like always thank you for writing this wonderful story and I´m looking forward to the next chapter. Take care of yourself and I wish you and your girls Happy Easter. Big hugs, Sunny.
Author's Response: You are such a sweetheart for leaving me not one but two reviews Sunny. It was my honor to use your name for our disguised Justin and it fit in perfectly with the story. I love your wild imagination. There are some things that won't fit with where I'm heading with the story but some that will fit in nicely. The one thing I can promise you is that there will be several unexpected twists to this story. Don't forget, there is a real killer on the loose. 'Sunny' may have more to worry about than a good looking cop, a train full of females, and convincing everyone he is just one of the girls. Who knows what may be lurking in the dark shadows for our young hero? Mwahahaha!!! Btw, don't forget that the setting is the '30's and men were not so open about being gay. They felt safer pretending to be interested in girls and for good reason. This is why cops like Brian only spent time at places where everyone else was like him so that he could relax and be himself. It makes one appreciate the differences between the past and today when Brian could feel much safer on a night out with the boys. Actually if I have my history correct, Berlin was one of the few places where gay men felt free to be themselves in public places in the early 30's, but it was definitely not true in America at that same time. I've left you many more comments on my LJ so check that out too, and thanks again for letting me know that you are happy with where I've taken your idea. Much love and big hugs always, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:32 AM · On: The Masquerade Begins
Ahh Justin singing. I can't wait to see how that works out. And now Brian's had what he needs. Another great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I thought that fans of Randy who know what a really good singer he is in real life would appreciate his altar ego having a good voice too. LOL! Brian is about to start an adventure that will offer him a lot more surprises than just catching up to a fugitive on the run. Hope you will enjoy the ride. Thanks so much for commenting Jackie. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2009 10:55 PM · On: The Masquerade Begins
This is fun! I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kate. I'll have more as soon as it comes back into rotatiion. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:54 AM · On: The Masquerade Begins
can't wait for them to hear justin sing. brian is one very clever man. now that he knows where justin could possibly be, let the merry chase begin. it seems that craig isn't much different than normally.
Author's Response: The chase is definitely on and there are some big surprises coming for both men on the way to California. As for Craig...I just can't seem to write that man as anything but a loser. LOL! Poor man....Not (as my grandkids would say)! Thanks for the review Sherrie. I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:54 AM · On: The Masquerade Begins
Justin having to sing is perfect! I was a little worried about the instrument issue. Cute new name for him too. Clever of Brian to notice that notepad near the entryway.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments Kat. I thought of the singing when I realized what a beautiful voice Randy (our sweet Justin) actually has in real life. I thought...why not give Justin that same lovely voice. I chose Sunny for one obvious reason and also to honor the young lady who recommended the story idea to me in the first place. I'm glad you liked it. I have to admit I stole the notepad idea from dozens of old time murder mysteries I've seen over the years. LOL! But of course our brilliant Detective would have clued in on it anyway. LOL! Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
My Dear Grammy, now that I´ve read the 2nd chapter I´m sad...cause it´s over. I could have gone on reading for hours. It´s like watching a movie and after 5 minutes the first commercial break starts and you know it will take days for the movie to continue. On the other hand it gives you something to look forward to and time to let your own imagination fly. So now we met “the Heat”. Officer Kinney seems like a guy who´s a bit bored with his job. He´s doing his job for years now and nothing can surprise him anymore. He´s more concerned about that “Someone was going to have a devil of a time getting that large crimson stain out of the carpeting” than about the victim. Mr. V is just another case. And not a very interesting one. They have a witness, a description and soon they´ll have the name of the suspect. It won´t take more than a week to arrest the murderer and another case is solved. No, certainly no challenge at all. A week? Don´t be too sure Mr. Kinney. I guess you´re in for the ride of your life. You want a challenge you´re certainly getting one. We´ll see if you´re man enough to take up that challenge. I wish everybody in their life had a friend like Daphne but those are like diamonds, rare and hard to get. I´m glad that Justin has her in his life and that says a lot about himself too. She´s a wonderful person, selfless in her ways to help a friend. She not only provides him with clothes and money but also offers him her support, love and strength. To know to have her at his side – not in person but in his heart – will take some weight off of his shoulders during his journey in the land of the unknown. Justin certainly didn´t like the idea to become a woman. But what choices did he have? Of course he could stay in NY. He would get arrested sooner or later. He would go to jail for a murder he didn´t commit. Let´s be realistic here, the police would be content to have him their No.1 suspect behind bars. Nobody would make an effort to look for someone else even if he would protest his innocence. So he knows he has to disappear to vanish completly. Let time be his ally for now. He´s not a coward who´s running away before thinking clearly. Being a woman isn´t even easy for us who are born as a woman but to pretend to be one is unconceivably harder. He has to stay in his role 24/7 because his life depends on being convincing. And to make it even more difficult he is travelling with a bunch of women. Considering Daphne´s reaction to Justin´s transformation I guess he makes a beautiful woman. Women can be cruel when they suspect competition. They sniff the air and are able to reveal your innermost secrets. So watch out Justin-a. For Justina I´m not sure if I had chosen this name. I think it´s too close to home. At some point in this story the police/Mr.Kinney will be on his trail. They will know that Justin entered the train in NY shortly after the murder and that he didn´t belong to the group at this time. Sure Justin can hide behind his wig, his dress and a lot of make up but he can´t change his height, his built or his blue eyes. To hear that “her” name is Justina could make his pursuers prick up their ears and cause them to take a closer look at him. A look that could bring the truth to light. I hope he knows how to fight with the weapons of a woman by then. Oh god, I guess I´m rambling along... See that´s what happens when I have too much time and let my imagination run wild. Big huge hugs as always,Sunny
Author's Response: My dear Sunny, you can ramble on for as long as you like any time you like. You know how much I enjoy hearing from you and since this story was inspired by you I welcome any comments you have. And what a brilliant comment you made. You caught something that I missed that is very important. Of course Justina is the wrong name. Luckily, I didn't write it in such a way that it is set in stone. I'm working out in my mind right now how I can slip in something else for the folks on the train to know him by and I've come up with the perfect name. It will fit in perfectly with the story, our character, and the explanation for the name will fit too. Thank you so very much for bringing this up before it was too late to back out of the corner I had painted myself into. LOL! Much love and appreciation always, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
Justin in a wig...what a picture. I can't wait to see what happens when he goes with the band. And what he'll do with the police going after him. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Ahhh Jackie, you know you are most interested in one particular policeman going after him....am I right? LOL! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. The journey is just beginning. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
I cannot wait to read the adventures of Justina with the band! Wonderful second chapter! ciao
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kika. Poor Justin/Justina is going to be in over his head but he will have unexpected allies in no time so join us again. I really hope you enjoy the journey. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
justin with ringlets, he'd look like shirley temple. lol off to california with a hot police detective on his tail. and his tail is what the detective will be after. let the fun begin.
Author's Response: Ahh Sherrie, I have to admit that I got a bit of a giggle just picturing Justin in the girlish wig. He definitely looked better (in my mind) in the more adult style. Poor Justin is going to have to keep a close watch on his tail cause more than one man is on it, but of course the detective will be the most welcome one. LOL! Thanks for giving me your comments. Big old hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Detective Kinney on the Job
And now the journey begins for Justin. I hope things will be ok for him at least for a little while.
Author's Response: Our poor Justin is going to be in for quite a bumpy ride but he will get some unexpected help along the way from surprising sources. Have no fear, it is one journey he will never forget. Thanks so much for the comments Kat. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2009 11:51 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
ops! I used the wrong word. Sorry! :-P I love the first chapter!
Author's Response: My dear Kika, I considered your comment a compliment. No need to apologize at all. I'm very glad you enjoyed the beginning of the story and I hope you will continue to enjoy where it goes next. I apologize for taking so long to answer but I've been knocked down by another infection. Ah well, I'll just keep coming back every time. No nasty bugs are going to keep me from my B/J loving. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:10 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
Now I'm entangled by the future evolution of the story! *hugs* kika
Author's Response: Oh dear, I didn't want to get you all tangled up Kika but I do hope that you will continue to enjoy this story in the future. Thank you very much for commenting for me. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:50 AM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
Oh, wow! Justina! LOL!! Hey, do what you gotta do. Poor guy, what a situation to be caught up in. I knew that guy was up to no good when he asked Justin to copy that painting.
Author's Response: You have to admit, Justin would make a pretty girl with the right accessories and that Sunshine smile. A man's got to do what a man's got to do when being threatened with prison while innocent. There is much more to be learned about the murdered Mr. Vanderbeke so come back for more soon. Thanks so much for commenting Kat. I really appreciate it. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:05 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
My Dear Grammy, after I wrote my letter to you I read the first chapter of – may I say it – our story. I know that you´re the author and every word belongs to you but I´m a bit proud that I had the idea. Thanks for mentioning my name in the intro to the story. I was so excited and nervous when I started reading because I waited so long to see the first chapter of it that I was actually a bit afraid to start reading. Do you know the feeling that you anticipate something so much that you´re disapointed at the end because your expectations were too high? I should have known that I had nothing to be worried about. You´re a brilliant author and I was hooked immediatley. As soon as I started I could imagine everything you descibed – in black and white. This story has to be in black and white. The lack of color deepens the feelings and the vibes you get from that story. The people, the surroundings, the atmosphere, the suspense and the emotions become more visible without color. I hope that makes sense. To me it does (LOL). I was so sad when I came to the end of the chapter. If it was a book I would have read it in one session. I like the way you could fit in Daphne in the story and I´m wondering whom else we will meet during the ride. I have my suspicions when it comes to the leader of the Ladies orchestra (grins). I´m curious to see what Justin will look like and if he can pull it off to be Miss Kimble. Did you know that Lindsay Lohan bought the rights of the movie “ Some like it Hot” ? She wants to make a remake with herself in the role of MM. Can you believe that? Someone should tell her that that is a bad idea cause there is nothing she could improve. This movie is perfect. Big huge hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: My dear Sunny, of course you can refer to this one as our story. I never would have thought of writing this story without your help. I just hope that you will continue to enjoy it as it moves along. When I write the words I picture the characters as if they were in an old 1930's film noir movie which helps motivate me. I'm thrilled to know that you got that feeling as you read it. That means I'm doing something right. I definitely needed Daphne in this story and eventually most of the gang will be included. I have the feeling your suspicions about the leader of the all girl band are totally correct. You'll soon see, that I promise. I wasn't aware that Lindsay had bought the rights to Marilyn's old film but no one could do it the justice that she did. Miss Monroe was a one of a kind...a true original, and I adored here. I never missed a single film she made. Well keep an eye out for the next chapter coming very soon where we will meet the intrepid police detective, Brian Kinney. Thank you for your comments. I was looking forward to them eagerly and I feel so very good right now. Big huge hugs always, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:38 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
great start. can´t wait for more :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much for joining me on the new story Rose. I will do my best to keep it interesting and a fun ride for you. Big hugs always, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 04:19 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
Oooo very interesting. The first chapter was great. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: My dear Jackie, I am so happy to know that I've brought you something new and you enjoyed it. I just hope you will enjoy the ride on this new story train. This one is going to be quite an adventure for our intrepid lovers. I look forward to hearing your comments in the future. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 03:20 PM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
Meine liebe Grammy, I hope you did your german lessons...LOL YOU DID IT! WOW! I´m at work right know and had some minutes so I checked the news on MW and what did I see? The first chapter. You just made my day. I´m so excited . I printed the chapter out hugged it to my heart and put it carefully in my bag. As soon as I will be home I will read it. I just know that it will be brilliant as always and let me tell you once again that I´m so thankful that you´re doing better and were able to put my idea in words. Some minutes ago I found your Em@il. Thanks. I printed it out as well, I´ll take it home and read it there. I will answer you as soon as I can. Have a wonderful day and say hello to your Mädels. Big huge hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: Meine lieber freund (Boy do I hope I got that right), I am enjoying learning all the German words you've sent me. I've always loved the sound of the language. I'm so happy to know you got the first chapter. I would never have thought of this story if it weren't for you. I just hope you will approve of where the story leads me. You will no doubt see that I'm not sticking with the movie's storyline real close but I can promise you that I'll do my very best to please you with whatever direction the story takes me. Remember how I told you that I never know where I'm going next till I sit down at the keyboard and start picturing the action in my head. LOL! Please keep me informed if you have any thoughts about how the story is going. And...Von der Unterseite meines Herzens danke. (Please tell me what I just wrote made sense to you!) Big huge hugs always, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:54 AM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
grammy, what a fantastic plot. this story should be a thrill to write. i can't wait to picture justin dressed in drag. this will be a fun read. i can feel it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are excited about this story Sherrie. I thought the idea for it was really worth pursuing when another reader, Sunny, suggested a story based on the old movie, which was always a big favorite of mine. I'm definitely going to have fun picturing Justin as Justina in my own mind so that I can get it down right....poor Justin. LOL! I hope you will be pleased where this story leads. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:56 AM · On: A Shot in a Darkened Room
It is a great story so far! Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I'm so glad this has captured your attention Vikinglass (Btw, I love your name a lot). I hope you will continue to enjoy the story as it moves along. Thank you very much for letting me know that you have checked this one out. Big hugs, Grammy
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