Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2021 01:39 AM · On: Coming of Age
Guh, this was just so gorgeous!
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Reviewer: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2021 01:04 AM · On: Coming of Age
A mixture of emotions done in a well written way. Good job
Reviewer: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2021 01:04 AM · On: Coming of Age
A mixture of emotions done in a well written way. Good job
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 04:48 PM · On: Befriend
Finding someelse who is going through what Justin is, is huge.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 07:41 AM · On: Befriend
Oh dear poor Justina and Brian. All this time Justin wasn’t fully aware of the impact his seizures had on others and too see his new friend has frightened him and made him feel a burden. Brian is so pissed as the various diseases and deafness do not give Brian much space to help him reduce the pain and anxiety and now he has lost another one.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 07:40 AM · On: Befriend
Oh dear poor Justina and Brian. All this time Justin wasn’t fully aware of the impact his seizures had on others and too see his new friend has frightened him and made him feel a burden. Brian is so pissed as the various diseases and deafness do not give Brian much space to help him reduce the pain and anxiety and now he has lost another one.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2021 10:59 PM · On: Befriend
Thank you for the update, I've been missing this story so much.
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2021 05:35 PM · On: Befriend
Love this story so much.
Would you take bribe of some kind to update more frequently...
Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2021 06:55 PM · On: Sinai
When will this story be finished
Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2021 06:55 PM · On: Sinai
When will this story be finished
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2020 05:17 PM · On: Sinai
This is the most interesting family. Evan is doing what is right for him. I can't help but wonder what Brian will do if something takes Justin from him.
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2020 01:09 AM · On: Sinai
Why is all I got out of this that Evan is cheating on Justin?
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2020 01:06 AM · On: Sinai
While I don't think it was right to lie to Brian and Justin about where he's been going, I understood it once he explained it. But it was really hard for Brian to hear Evan talking about Justin and if he died. But Brian was right; Justin is everywhere, and not just in a scar or paint from his shoe, but everywhere you look.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2020 12:08 PM · On: Overnight
This was a really good chapter!! As scary as this situation could have been, with being locked in overnight, it gave Derek a first hand account of Brian and Justin, and how they are when supposedly no one is watching, and it really opened his eyes. Everyone knows that Brian will do anything for Justin, but to actually see him in that moment gives it a whole new meaning.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2020 04:14 PM · On: How to Be Alone
Justin is getting a dog. This could be good.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2020 08:51 AM · On: How to Be Alone
Omg Brian his burden is to look into bright blue eyes and cave like wind out of a balloon 🤣🤣🤣
Thank you for two chapters so close together
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2020 12:58 AM · On: How to Be Alone
Great chapter!!! I'm glad that Brian decided to go home and check on Justin after all. With Justin having a seizure, he needed to be checked out. And good for Justin for talking Brian into getting the dog. As much as he probably will be allergic, having the service dog nearby will definitely be a huge help to him in the long run.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2020 06:15 PM · On: Overnight
Out of all the employees not one was a lockpicker? Could I ask a favor? Could you note who is talking at the start. It wasn't until halfway through that I figured out it was Derek.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2020 11:28 PM · On: Overnight
Omg I did a little dance when I saw this chapter pop up. I missed it so much.
I really enjoy the way you bring to our attention the many nuances of asl that we hearing non sign language people didn’t know. I guess the only good thing Brian and co could take from being locked up overnight is they were together. Imagine both Justin’s and Brian’s distress if Justin was alone at the house overnight!
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2020 10:00 PM · On: Overnight
Beautiful as always.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2019 04:30 PM · On: The Best Medicine
They are so intuned with each other.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2019 01:52 PM · On: The Big Easy
Great chapter as always!! It was great that Brian treated the guys to a few days in the Big Easy and they all seemed to have a great time.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2019 06:43 AM · On: The Big Easy
Oh that was a lovely chapter not too much angst but it is obviously on the radar 😄
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2019 01:45 AM · On: Permanence
I really can't see of a time where Brian would get tired of being with Justin - sick or healthy. He just loves him. And if things were reversed and Brian was the one who was sick, Justin would feel the same way about him.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2019 08:59 AM · On: Permanence
Wow Brian is amazing he stays calm and controlled while he manages everything. Justin is amazing even when he is at his lowest he is still looking for change upwards.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2019 04:00 AM · On: Permanence
I love hearing about Evan, but I do wish Justin could get better.
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2019 02:14 AM · On: Permanence
Every time I think this can’t get any better, it does.
Beautiful.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2019 11:05 AM · On: Meeting in the Middle
Great chapter!! It was great how Justin realized on his own, instead of just toughing it out and figuring out too late that he was too tired for the party. That's all Brian wants - for him to realize his limitations and not overdue. And good for Justin for sticking to his guns about that tub. He knows what he wants and what will be good for him in the long run and steps for the tub is not it!!!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2019 08:42 AM · On: Meeting in the Middle
I say this nearly every time but you make me cry and then go aw. I loved how hard Brian had to work not to micromanage Justin and to allow him space to decide his own life. I think that is probably the first time Brian has been so relieved to stay in on New Years Eve
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2019 03:57 AM · On: Meeting in the Middle
Justin gets his tub just the way he wants it and Brian gets to stay at home with him. Win/win.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Gratitude
I could feel Mickeys worry for Justin and Brian of course. I loved everything about this chapter I got so much feeling from it.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2019 08:00 PM · On: Home for the Holidays
I'm thinking Evan is pretty much finished with his family. The way they have and continue to treat him is horrible.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2019 05:41 AM · On: Home for the Holidays
Omg you are able to make me cry I can’t read the words and I get so sad for Brian Justin and Evan and then you write”and that’s your room”
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2019 08:55 PM · On: Home for the Holidays
I'm sorry about Adam, but glad that they told Evan about his room.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2018 10:40 PM · On: If My Heart Was a House
This is one of my favorite chapters. Sure Justin was sick, but he wasn't dying. Brian realized that what they'd had before was not what they wanted now. Plus Evan could move in and I never thought that would happen. Brian has changed big time and for the better.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 12:40 PM · On: If My Heart Was a House
This new house really ticks off the boxes for both Brian and Justin and I'm glad that Heidi suggested it. All of the apartments she was showing him were great in their own way, but still had little issues that could potentially cause problems, but Brian was looking for the perfet place that didn't have any of those issues, and be great for the both of them at the same time.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 12:14 PM · On: How Far We've Come
Hmm, I never saw this chapter before and it was a good one, as always. Email notifications for story updates have been sporadic lately, and I'm checking the site constantly to see if stories have been updated, but I must have missed this one.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 08:27 AM · On: If My Heart Was a House
Oh wow that last quote jaw dropping beautiful
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 03:15 AM · On: If My Heart Was a House
Seriously can not wait for the move.
one question why not a house with room for an elevator
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 02:27 AM · On: If My Heart Was a House
Oh- there is so much about a house and Brian and Justin. can't wait to read more
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2018 02:29 PM · On: Until the Scenery Changes
Wow so now they are going to move! I loved how Brian admitted he wasn’t being rational
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2018 12:38 PM · On: Sister Winter
If I was Molly I’d be freaking out the very same way. That kind of fear can be so gripping at your gut nothing would seem right. I’m so glad that Brian arranged what he did for Justin was perfect.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2018 08:42 PM · On: Atypical
Feeling that bad for so long would drive anyonecaround the twist. I can’t blame Justin for being how he is. Brian is so good with Jane he really is a natural I love it.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2018 10:32 PM · On: Gratitude
Well, that was definitely not a usual Thanksgiving dinner, but at least the New York family as well as Michael attended.
One thing I would like to see that has been hinted at from time to time, but never fully talked about, would be the Pittsburgh family finally getting a clue as to what Brian and Justin's life is really like. Sure, they hear snippets here and there or Jen talks with Debbie, or Brian will make a mention of something on a phone call to Michael, but I always got the impression that the Pittsburgh clan just really didn't get the full extent of Justin's many medical issues.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2018 09:11 AM · On: Stop
Oh wow that hit right to my core, such an incredible chapter. What they went through here would test anyone to their limits and beyond. Getting that sick is scaryvas heck not just for the person who is sick but those who love them and you showed it perfectly.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2018 12:10 AM · On: Sister Winter
Omg this story slays me every time you are amazing
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2018 03:37 PM · On: Sister Winter
Wow. I was getting depressed just from reading, but there was no way I could stop reading. I can't get over Jane saying Dad. When did she learn that. I need to know if Molly saw a therapist and if Justin got better enough to hold his daughter.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2018 02:36 PM · On: Sister Winter
I'm so glad that Brian went and talked with Molly. He's right. Depression runs in their family and she is definitely on her way, if she's not already there, so she definitely needs to start talking with someone. And even before this latest episode with Justin, things haen't been going so well for her. But I think Brian bringing Molly and Jane was just what Justin need to make his day a little brighter. And Jane calling him Dad probably made his whole year!!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2018 02:02 PM · On: Atypical
I don't know who I feel sorrier for Brian or Justin.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2018 02:27 AM · On: Atypical
Poor Justin. I can totally understand his frustration with everything. Having Daphne postpone her wedding, not being able to spend time with his friends or Jane. But I think it's very sweet of Brian to go over and spend time with her and get videos of her to show to Justin. I am curious as to what is going on with Molly, though...
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2018 08:06 AM · On: Pause
Poor Justin can’t get a break can he. I can’t even imagine how terrifying it must be to deal with all that.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 02:08 PM · On: Bring Your Daughter to Work Day
Lol I can see Cynthia freaking out over the baby. Once again my heart is skipping a beat at how Brian is with Jane it’s so cute. I’m worried like Evan is at how many colds Justin is getting.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 01:29 PM · On: Saturday
This had me in tears, Molly is such a strong girl andBrian really is a great brother in Ito her. Their bond is perfect and he helped her through a hard time.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 08:06 AM · On: Outrageous Fortune
Brian was so amazing here, and you can tell the baby loves him so much. I loved this x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 01:30 AM · On: Stop
I sincerely hope he will be okay.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2018 01:00 AM · On: Modern Love
I take it this was before they learned sign language.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2018 12:08 AM · On: Pause
Oh my, you weren't kidding. This is bad.
Reviewer: steph11157 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2018 09:04 PM · On: Stop
Again you nailed it! This chapter Stop It was emotional, amazing! Thank you!! Can't wait for more chapters.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2018 08:10 PM · On: Stop
Wow every time you write a chapter I am so amazed at the insights you write that I don’t even think about in this relationship it’s just brilliant
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2018 04:53 AM · On: Pause
Omg another emergency for Brian and Justin and they haven’t got down from this one. Interesting take on the boys considering that Justin might be positive they both didn’t panic. Loved Justin asking Brian if he would be pissed and his reply “yeah a little bit” such a understatement considering how the cocktail would be impossible for Justin to take.
So what have you got up your sleeve for them now ?
Reviewer: steph11157 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2018 11:55 PM · On: The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing
Oh wow...I was on the edge the whole time as I read. I love how Brian loves Justin. How he's there for Justin even as bad as everthing is. This chapter titled Pause is absolutley heartwrenchingly wonderfully written. I can't get enough of this story. I can barely wait between chapters. Bravo!
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2018 02:33 PM · On: Pause
Poor Justin cannot catch a break, can he? The things that are just horrible with all these medications he is taking, even if he doesn't end up allergic to them, is the possible side effects, which is what happened to him here. The convulsent was destroying his bone marrow. The remedy ends up being a thousand times worse than the original issue.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2018 04:31 AM · On: Bring Your Daughter to Work Day
Interesting chapter. I think Brown wouldn't have minded having Jane in the meeting.
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2018 02:26 AM · On: Bring Your Daughter to Work Day
Ok that ended way to soon. I need more of take your daughter to work...
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2018 12:30 AM · On: Bring Your Daughter to Work Day
I just love how Brian dotes on Jane!! He will drop anything and everything to spend time with her, even at the office!! And I'm surprised the idea of a daycare at the office never really came up before. They should definitely look into that.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2018 02:40 AM · On: Saturday
Just how many people have Brian adopted. He and Justin could have kept the baby.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2018 01:35 AM · On: Saturday
Loved the chapter!! I've always loved how Brian and the Taylor's all get along, and how he and Molly have a brother / sister relationship. He treats her the same way he does Justin, in that he will do anything for her.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2018 01:54 PM · On: Outrageous Fortune
Taking a baby to the hospital and not knowing what's going on makes for panic time. Good that Evan offered to go help. Brian wrapped up his meeting early it seemed. It's too late Brian loves Jane.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 08:36 AM · On: Into My Night
Poor Justin I cannot even imagine what that must feel like. I think they did a great job in helping him it cannot be easy my heart goes out to them.
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2018 06:52 PM · On: Into My Night
I don't even have the words for how gorgeous and perfect this is <3
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2018 12:36 PM · On: Into My Night
Justin was right. All he needed was for it to rain. Took me a while to figure out who was talking in this chapter.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 01:30 PM · On: Flashback
Wow! No mean Claire and she finally got it. Great job.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 11:56 AM · On: Flashback
Wow this was brilliant. I loved Claire talking with Justin and seeing a fresh view of what her brother has and with the baby as well. It was truly beautiful so thank you for that. And now with her son being gay and her wanting their help to talk to him giving him advice this going to be great.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2018 11:17 AM · On: Flashback
Great chapter!!! I liked Claire just stopping by and spending time with Justin. She's never really had the chance or even wanted to get to know him, so this was a very eye opening experience for her, and I think she was pleasantly surprised. She got to see a little of what his and Brian's life was like and even got to see a different side of Brian as well. And how ironic is that Peter is gay? But I think it was a good thing that Brian recommended Justin for him to talk to.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2018 02:54 PM · On: The Thing About Fairy Tales
This version reads more realistic than what they led us to believe went down.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2018 10:00 AM · On: The Thing About Fairy Tales
I had tears in my eyes reading this, I could feel the pain in Brian. The poor guy can’t say with words what he really wants to say out loud. It’s his actions that he is trying to use. I’m glad Justin saw them after awhile but the journey to get there hurt so much. Excellent work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2018 08:44 AM · On: Hiatus
Oh man my heart was pounding Brian loves him so much and if he could just say it it out loud things maybe different. Loved how he reacted right way when Ethan called to say how sick Justin was. That’s what you call a partner.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2018 11:38 PM · On: The Thing About Fairy Tales
Excellent chapter as always!!! I think with this chapter, up until this particular moment in time, was probably the first time they really communicated with each other; got things out in the open and were finally on the same page.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2018 12:06 AM · On: Hiatus
I still can't tell what Justin ever saw in Ian. Between Brian and Ian, it would be an easy pick. And I was ecstatic when Justin finally broke up with him. I know Brian was never one for displaying any outward emotion, but it was totally obvious in everything he did how he truly felt about Justin.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 11:12 PM · On: Keep Breathing
I'm with Justin; I just can't see how all of this doesn't affect Brian in some way, shape or form. Unless, he's just keeping it all inside.
Author's Response: No, he's not. He's just...good at this. I'm really not interested in telling tortured caretaker stories.
Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 05:39 PM · On: Hiatus
Wow. Brian all but said "I love you" and Justin still went back to Ian. But we know what a liar Ian is, and how it turns out.
But seeing Brian so destroyed was heartbreaking.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 02:38 PM · On: Keep Breathing
I loved everything about this chapter. Brian was amazing and he truly looked after Justin so well. He was kind, loving and patient with everything he did for him. That kind of care comes from pure love and you showed this so perfectly. Thatuou for writing this .
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 02:37 AM · On: Keep Breathing
It would be so nice if a miracle cure could be found.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 03:43 PM · On: Welcome
Omg my heart just burst with Joy. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039; That baby is going to be so spoiled. Brian is already wrapped around her finger I can tell. Such a loving family they all are.
Reviewer: Alicecat2012 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 02:53 PM · On: Welcome
I have been following this saga and this is one of my favorite chapters. I especially love your endings. They always exude so much hope and love.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 01:04 PM · On: And Many More
This touched me so much. The moments on beach truly beautiful and so moving. Thank you so much for writing this.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 10:52 AM · On: A House In Virginia
I feel for Brian here, I think he felt insecure over Evan. I do think that the two of them should be enough for each other. I do understand why Brian feels Justin needs a deaf boyfriend but I just want them to just they two of them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 02:16 PM · On: A Kind of Magic
You can't help but be sad when reading this because you want Justin to be happy about what he's done, but with all his problems it's impossible. But you end it perfectly with Magic.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 08:21 AM · On: Family Bonding
Omg poor Molly, I’m wondering was she spiked or something. Brian really does love her so much. I love how he came back so worried. I understand Justin’s reaction and I’m glad he figured out why Brian was acting how he was.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 07:45 AM · On: Something New
That’ was so hard for them to tell their friends about the bashing that made me so sad. Justin should have listened to Brian shouldn’t he. I love that Derek cane to Brian for advice it shows the level of their friendship.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 04:28 PM · On: No Apologies
I’m not sure why but I did feel a bit sorry for Micheal. Was I wrong to? There was so much depth and feeling in this , so good.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 11:56 AM · On: Dear Justin
They were brilliant, it was great to see how Justin and Ben communicated and reading them very so interesting I must say. Thank you for sharing them.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 04:41 PM · On: If They Can Do It
Awe man that was brilliant I loved them helping Derek to get with Daphne. d83;a039;
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 03:01 PM · On: The First Five Years
That was coming for a while wasn’t it and I think it cleared the air for them. I love when they talk freely to show how they are feeling. It shows their bond.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 01:47 PM · On: All Together
Loved this each chapter is better and better. It’s sad his mom died but it was great to see the New York people interact with the Pittsburgh crew. I love what Gus did lol and I do hope that we see more of him with his dad.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 12:38 PM · On: A Slight Inconvenience
Even though Justin was sick and I wanted to hug him and look after him. This made me cry happy tears for Emily. I bet she didn’t expect that to happen to god her to see how much Brian not only valued Cynthia for her work but her as well by giving them those bonuses. That really made me smile when I needed the most.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 08:03 AM · On: Respite
Brian is so good for doing that. I hope it works out and she is really good working there.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 03:17 PM · On: A Matter of Timing
Awe I loved seeing Molly and Luke with the guys. That warmed my heart so much. I hope we see lots more of that.
Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 03:09 PM · On: Under Pressure
After Brian had explained that Justin and Gabe had broken up, and how the breakup had been tough on Justin, and Brian too as he liked Gabe and how Justin was tough to handle when he didnt have a ringer to take him off his hands acouple of times a week. It made me wonder just who Gabe was really a BF for...Justin or a convenience for Brian! No antler bashing, just a lot of scratching my head and going wtf! Candy
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 12:29 PM · On: Under Pressure
A good look at the dynamics between Justin, Brian and Gabe. Brian knows Justin like no one else does and Justin gets Brian the way no one else does.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 11:34 AM · On: Modern Love
Love hearing things through Brian’s voice and this made me happy and sad. I could feel his love for Justin and the sadness he was feeling inside for the loss of Justin’s hearing . It truly touched my heart.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 10:48 AM · On: One Bad Day
Oh man, this made me tear up reading this. My heart shattered for Brian and Justin. Poor Brian didn’t mean to do that he really didn’t. I’m so glad Daphtcame to help them. I hope all will be ok.
Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 02:56 AM · On: Mixed Doubles
You didn’t loose me, this is still one of my all time favorite stories. Although im still baffled and trying to understand Brian’s reason for finding a boyfriend for Justin!! I get the “he’s depressed, he’s tired” but I didn’t see this coming, their relationship has always been an enigma of sorts. I’m wondering if, and when it may just come back to bite Brian on the ass!! Guess this just adds to their strange love story. I will be glad when old Gabe is history and it’s back to just our boys!! Candy
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2018 03:01 PM · On: Mixed Doubles
OK, I've reached the point where I've run out of new chapters... and re-reading old chapters. What do I do now??? Obsessively check for new chapters all day, that's what!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2018 02:59 PM · On: Anniversario
It's difficult for healthy people to deal with disappointment when a planned vacation suddenly goes awry. So much more difficult for Sunshine, on so many levels... especially when you consider how hard it was for him to even get to Italy. I'm glad he's enjoying the museums thought!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2018 10:43 AM · On: Easy
I loved hearing all of this from Brian’s point of view. You could hear all the love and pride he has for him . I always enjoy those kinds of chapters and I could feel the passion you put into it. Thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: Brynneth (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2018 02:40 AM · On: The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing
This story caught my interest because I, like Justin, am a late-deafened adult. Mine is also genetic and my daughter is also deaf. It’s nice to see a story where the character isn’t born deaf. It gives much more insight. However, having gone through this myself, I have questions. Why doesn’t Justin get a cochlear implant? Or is his deafness not related to his inner ear? Most people who grow up hearing choose not to live in silence because it can be difficult to adapt. Of course, they don’t always work and require therapy. I do like that Brian was willing to learn ASL since many people aren’t. There’s a few other things I find a bit off, but please don’t take this as criticism. I love the story and the anguish of losing your hearing is very real and you portray it so well. I remember going through the same thing as Justin. I still am! Thank you for writing this and I look forward to more.
P.S. I haven’t read all the chapters yet so if you addressed my question already, I apologize!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 04:16 PM · On: Negotiations
Jeez Justin needs to come with a warning right eeeesssh
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 01:46 PM · On: Do You Look at Your Life
I’m with Brian, how do you give your opinion on whether or not he should have the surgery. It’s so huge and scary. I was tense waiting to see what would happen.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 09:18 AM · On: Long Night's Journey Into Day
Loved this chapter, it showed how close Brian and Justin are and how fantastic a friend Michael is to them. I loved Brian talking to that guy in the plane I honestly think he needed that.
Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 09:00 AM · On: A Change of Plans
Oh dear Grindr why did they tell Brian about it. And I feel for Justin so much has changed for him. How much more can he take.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 01:28 AM · On: Family Bonding
I'm still interested in the "eaves-dropping" plot bunny. Similar to the furniture store. Workmen at the house to repair or work on something, like maybe refinishing the floors that Justin ruined when he dropped some paint or something... and Brian tries to cheer up Justin by making lewd comments about them, not realizing the guys understands ASL
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2018 01:11 AM · On: Something New
The re-telling of the bashing still brings me to tears. Just is very bratty and adorable when he's just "normal" sick, LOL!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 03:57 PM · On: On The Table
I love Gus with the boys and I hope we see more of him with them. I can understand why he asked his dad if they were gonna have a baby it’s only natural. I hope they do.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 09:47 AM · On: Emergency Contact
Aww man way to touch my heart again. I understand what Justin was thinking and it is hard to know what to do when you can’t figure out if it is the right thing at the time. I’m so glad Brian is there for him.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 08:47 AM · On: The One Where Justin Finishes His Work
I love how they interact they so get each other even without talking. Lol I can’t believe that Brian said that to Jennifer that made me smile and laugh at his reaction when he realized what he said. I can’t wait to see how Justins show goes I know he will be fabulous.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 07:16 AM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 4
I was shaking with emotions reading this chapter, they are both going through so much and Justin poor Justin is really trying so hard. I am so in love with how you are writing Brian I love this side of him. He is giving the right amount of support and love it’s just what Justin needs. I think Brian is getting the same back from Justin this is what makes them such a great couple they know what the other needs.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 02:45 AM · On: The One Where Brian Does Some Shopping
that was fun- love the ending
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 02:37 AM · On: The One Where Brian and Justin Take Manhattan
I'm melting in sap- but good sap- just love Brian and Justin and marriage- even though they are already married
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 02:20 AM · On: The One Where Brian Talks About Relationships
I've been reading this story and just loving it. I think you are really delving into deaf culture and the differences between hearing and non hearing. I love how
Brian is no longer afraid to admit that he loves Justin to distraction. Now off to read more
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 12:47 AM · On: No Apologies
Still find this one hard to read... but I think it's a case of "it's not you, it's me." I'm coming in with my own pre-conceived bias.
"I said like," Ben said. "Not love."
Sometimes the "like" is harder than the "love."
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 12:29 AM · On: Dear Justin
Very glad that Justin has Ben to talk to.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 12:25 AM · On: If They Can Do It
Fun chapter!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 02:41 PM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 3
Brians voice is so perfect here, I love hearing his thoughts and feelings through this. It cannot be easy watching someone you love go through all that Justin is.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 02:08 PM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 2
Such a powerful chapter, gosh your words moved me to tears. I could feel Brian’s pain gripping my heart so tight. I could feel Micheal and Bens as well and that they felt lost as to how to help their friend.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 12:42 PM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 1
OMG poor Justin that is such a horrible thing to happen to him and to Brian. I can’t even imagine the pain and fear he must be feeling. Thank god Micheal and Ben cane to help him.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 11:57 AM · On: The One Where Justin Freaks Out
😂 I never thought I’d see Justin have that kind of freak out. I felt for Brian trying to figure out what the heck was going on.
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